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Keep Him Secret, Keep Him Safe  by shirebound 28 Review(s)
Ainu LaireReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Ooh! You just read my mind! I just needed some nice Aragorn h/c, and look at what you came up with! I love hobbity heroes, too :)

I remember that Aragorn's healing leaves him weak and vulnerable- I wonder if all the energy he spent on Frodo, Sam, and Pippin left his immune system down so he caught a really nasty bug? I can certainly see it happening.

I imagine Frodo did not like leaving Aragorn all alone; Roheryn, too, must have been reluctant. I love how you've portrayed his relationship with the horse ^^

I cannot wait for more! Don't make us wait for too long :)

Author Reply: Thanks, Suvi. A little h/c to brighten the day!

You're a good guesser, but don't tell anyone. Shhhhh.... :)

Idril CelebrindalReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Oh I have to agree with everyone else, what a way to get us into the story!

"Without Warning" indeed!

Thanks for another new story to look forward to!


Author Reply: Thank you! Somehow this first chapter just started galloping along as fast as Roheryn. :)

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Wow! This story's off and running right off the bat. I really like how you've written both characters--they seem to leap from the page, fully alive. Now let's just hope poor Aragorn stays that way....

Author Reply: Thank you very much. LOL, characters in my stories *always* "stay that way"! And usually after a heaping helping of comfort, healing, and supportive friends.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
This sounds VERY serious, if Aragorn himself is so violently ill, and the worst takes him so swiftly! Noro lim indeed, Roheryn!

Author Reply: Roheryn is flying like the wind! Aragorn is at least surrounded by friends and companions, and not alone in the Wild. :)

Sila LumennReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Oh, this is good! You sure know how to keep us anxious for more. :-)

Author Reply: Awww, thank you. :)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Oh my goodness! What an exciting beginning!

I like the first part of the chapter, just the two of them enjoying their friendship and the peace and quiet. I could just imagine the scene as they rode.

But good heavens--what a sudden reversal! (And, of course, I *LOVE* that it's Frodo who is taking care of him, and bravely going for help. When those he loves are in trouble, Frodo always proves his competence and strength of will!)

Author Reply: I don't think Frodo and Aragorn would have had many opportunities to just enjoy one another's company without other people around (or a dangerous Quest to accomplish). I like giving them the chance.

And it *is* fun to reverse roles once in awhile. *grins*

SlightlyTookishReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
Ooh, that's a really exciting first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Author Reply: Thank you! :)

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2008
A good beginning Shirebound. And naturally leave us hainging by our fingernails. *grin* Looking forward to reading the rest of this, especially if it has both Elladan and Elrohir in it.

Author Reply: Thanks, Fiondil! I've come to enjoy weaving the twins (or at least one of them) into many of my stories.

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