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| A Lesson in Lineage by Misty | 11 Review(s) |
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| Tigger | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/3/2008 |
| Oh, I remember reading this on the AA list a couple of months ago, but it's much better here Misty. More fleshed out and w/a better explaination of things. I especially like how Aragorn dealt w/this. As he said, both he and Arwen were expecting this to happen, so he was prepared to tutor his son when/if a vision first happened. I really liked this over on AA, but it's so much better here Misty. Thanks for sharing the EE w/us. :oD Author Reply: Thanks. I'm glad you like the changes. The version on the OAA list met the word limit, but did seem just a little unfinished. This version allowed me to continue the conversation to a more natural conclusion. Thanks for the review. :) | |