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Tales of the Eldandili  by Alassiel 20 Review(s)
CesReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/4/2008
I just found your stories by way of Fiondil and am so glad I did.

This is a wonderful story so far and I do feel for Kevin. To be faced with all this and keep his sanity just goes to show he's special.

Love the stylus and slate - how original!

Your buildup to what's coming definitely has me on the edge of my seat!

Ces



Author Reply: Hello Ces,

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale. It was written several years ago for my friend Eruanneth _Luin, with whom I wrote a tale called Makalaurë, which is also on this site under her name.

Though Kevin's story is told (for now at least), he will appear in others in this series. Each tale is to recount how the Elf-friends found the Eldar and each other. I am working on Michael's Tale now, as inspiration comes.

Thanks again for your encouragement.

Blessings,

Alassiel



LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/30/2008
Ah, trust comes at last. Very good. And love the slate and stylus! I carry a set in my purse, and another in my computer bag, and another in my teaching bag....

Author Reply: Greetings Larner,

Since Kevin's Tale is one story, I am replying to all your reviews.

Yes, I also carry a slate and stylus, which is, for those who don't know, a way of writing in braille. I am very slow, however. I imagine that Pengolodh is very fast, with hands which, as Tolkien says of Legolas, move quicker than sight.

I'm sure Kevin will have moments of doubt, as we all do, but at least he has supportive friends.

As for Faëry, I love Smith of Wooton Major (I want to read the new edition if it ever becomes available in an accessible form) and wanted to bring both of Tolkien's visions together—that is, the one in his earlier writings and that in Smith. Also, I love the Celtic idea that Faëry exists alongside of or parallel to our daily world, and that one can enter it.

Thank you for the encouraging reviews.

Blessings,

Alassiel



LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2008
Ah, panic and fear can be so very overwhelming!

You know I'd love Ruth with her braille and Isil. And to meet Lady Yavanna in person! Poor Kevin--it will take time for him to come to believe, I fear.

Author Reply: Greetings Larner,

Forgive me for taking so long to reply. I'm still having a bit of trouble navigating the site.

I hope you enjoy the rest of this tale. It was written some years ago for my friend Eruanneth_Luin.

Blessings,

Alassiel



LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/30/2008
Ah, so Faerie is born! Wonderful! And the reason Elves have left Middle Earth is all too plausible.

Today Hughes is behaving, and finally I'm able to review this. Read this chapter the other day, but haven't been able to stay on long enough to do anything about it.

NerdanelReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/29/2008
Suilië Alassiel,

I know this is going to prove to be a wondrous and charming tale, and I can't wait to read more!

EdlynReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/28/2008
Lovely, absolutely lovely! I'm sitting here just reveling in how good this story is. Kevin is most definitely an Everyman. He has the same worries, doubts and questions I do. This is definitely going onto my favourites list and I look forward to the next installment.

Author Reply: Greetings Edlyn,

I'm so glad you enjoyed this tale. I wrote it several years ago, but finally got up enough courage to try posting it.

Kevin is the kind of modern person who finds it hard to accept what he cannot sense. It requires estel to do it, and I think that estel is one of the most most difficult things in the world to cultivate. I ask every day for the grace and courage to continue to do it, despite "the ways of the world".

Thank you for the review.

Blessings,

Alassiel



NeiliaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/26/2008
So Kevin, the unbeliever, is going to get acquainted with the One. Wish more would. The One does exist...and we can know Him, if we want to. I am looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Greetings Neilia,

Yes, He does. I hope I can be as subtle as Tolkien was in expressing this, for his writings are interwoven with his faith and hope. Like him, I don't like allegory, but I do like applicability. Also, in this tale, I wanted to express the positive value of myth in our lives. By myth, I do not mean falsehood, but an understanding that our daily experience is only one aspect of reality. See Tolkien's essay on fairy tales and his poem Mythopoeia for a much better explanation than I can give. Thanks for the review.

Blessings,

Alassiel



AdrianneReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/12/2008
Ahhh, I can't wait to see what transpires. Some of my favorite Elves have answered the summons so far. Will there be others?

And what of Men? Who will answer the call on their behalf? Descendants of some we know already?

Very interesting beginning. I'm intrigued.

Adrianne

Author Reply: Hello fellow Finrod fan. I'm glad the idea intrigues you. Believe it or not, I have been working on these tales for over forty years, as I have always thought it a shame that elves and men were sundered. Since the dominion of men came at the end of the Third Age, the elves can't return to Middle-earth to stay, but what about friendship? As for descendants of the heroic Atani of old, I don't know yet myself.

Blessings,

Alassiel


InglorReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/12/2008
bated breath...

Author Reply: Please don't turn blue. That would not be a good thing. The next chapter is in the final stages of editing, so I hope to post it soon. Thank you for your encouragement.

AlquawendeReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/10/2008
Please continue! This is a very good beginning so far.

Author Reply: Thank you for your encouragement. I am doing the final editing on the next chapter and hope to post it soon.

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