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The Green Knight and the Master of Esgaroth  by Le Rouret 11 Review(s)
FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 22 on 11/19/2008
This is a very dark fic. I have so many emotions mixed now. You are a great writer, this chapter has really affected me. I feel sorry for everyone there, Durfinwen, poor Durfinwen…how could she ever recover? my only hope is that she won’t remember half of this, because the dementia that she is suffering now. Tamin, for sure he will lost his innocence after this, no doubt (I do remember Fastred vision of Tamin been a Knight, so I’m holding to that and believing in him surviving this terrible time) When you have Legolas smelling him and comparing the before and after, it did break my heart, because it is an affirmation that nothing will be the same after this.
I notice that in presence of the Dwarves, the black spell or magic or whatever is, breaks, their victims are able to get some control, well if you call control to want to get kill, it is so sad to hear her pleading for death, and the end…You know, my strongest thought when I finished the chapter was Enough is enough, we need to start killing people, we need action, we need revenge…my, you have made me want to be there with a sword and cutting the master in pieces…
I have this disturbing question; Melina has her stomach gone because they eat babies?
You see, I’m imagining so many dark things…I’ll go and re-read Mardil courting story to light my day…I don’t need to tell you that I can’t wait for an update and that I’m so worry for them, and scary, and sad, mad, angry..I want five minute with you Muse!

Thanks and great chapter!

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