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Bits and Bobs  by Llinos 28 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/19/2007
OK, so now I'm hungry here at nearly five am! I'm amused too which is fine, but hungry is going to be a bit more trouble. LOL

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/19/2007
I simply cannot write a drabble and most certainly not a poetic one! I am so jealous of these.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/19/2007
Pippin Took as Beta? I think Merry's in trouble here. LOL

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/19/2007
The perfect Father's Day message for the father who plays favorites! I love the bit about 'having a go on the horn'.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/19/2007
(((((Although I can't take you without a fight,
Your soul cries out as you growl and bite.)))))

I like her spirit. I also love the way you've managed to get into the character's mind. Not many can think like an Orc but I do believe you've done that here. Another of my favorites.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/19/2007
This is one of my favorites. I'm so glad you posted it here. So funny and so very lyrical. I read it out loud here in my computer room because I do love poetry read aloud. Bravo!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/18/2007
I never thought that an Ord could feel the same pain of a lost love (or lust) that humans do. I have changed my tune. Smagnu obviously has a broken heart that pines for Ddraigspelt's beautful love (body).

Again, thank you (and Smagnu) for sharing your gift. :-)


PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/18/2007
I've laughed so much my neighbours probably think I'm a complete lunatic. Okay, I am.

I was rolling with laughter the first time I read this hilarious poem, but doubly so just now! I absolutely LOVE the first stanza - it gets me started every time!

As usual, I'm blown away by your brilliant poetry. Thanks so much for the laughs! I needed it.

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