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From Last to First  by Songbird 24 Review(s)
LorwenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/26/2003
Oooooohhhh, poor little elfling. I want to hold him and huggle him for the rest of his long life!!!!

It was to be expected that Thranduil wouldn't care so much for him after that prologue. But keeping him in the nursery to sleep that's just awfull!!!

I can really relate to Legolas feeling so lonely when all his friends were practising archery and he had to sit and watch. And I can imagine him sitting there, totally bored to death!

"All of Greenwood knew better then to get into the middle of a Royal battle and this one looked to be cataclysmic."

uh-oh you'd better watch it when a she-elf gets angry, especially when it's about her child :p Oh well, every mother get's angry when it's about their child :p

I like the name you gave his mother though: Elriowiel I wonder what that means...


Please post more soon!


Lorwen

LorwenReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 8/26/2003
Awww, not of to a very good start for that poor little green leave.
It's not his fault that his eldest brother got killed in a stupid dare. A child can never be replaced, he of all people should know that.

Very little is writen about the birth of an elf, even less about Legolas' birth. Or what happends to mother and child after birth for that matter. Good prologue and of to a good start for another dazzeling fic!!!

Can't wait to read more! *wink*

Lorwen

xsilicaxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/26/2003
Yay! Go Elriowiel(sp).
You go and kick some sense into silly Thranduil. Women always know what's best.
*Runs and gives Legolas a swift hug*

CAthy.
xx

xsilicaxReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 8/26/2003
Oh, it's been a while since I read the first chapter, and it hasn't lost any of its power. It is great how you establish the relationship, and even 'rivalry' in the eyes of Thranduil, between Legolas and Teril from the start.
You can already sense how Legolas' father will love from afar. That Legolas will forever be paired with Teril.

Cathy.
xx

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