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Confusion  by Anso the Hobbit 14 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/29/2006
Awww. I had to read at top speed, but still managed to thoroughly enjoy this. You started us out as confused as Merry! ...gradually casting light on the picture, until we knew what was happening. And the flashbacks kept adding little bits of additional light, in just the right amounts.

You do a marvellous job of portraying the relationships between the cousins.

It is nice to have you back.

Author Reply: Thanks, Lin! I'm glad you liked my confused story, lol. It's good to be back, although I'll be scarce since I only can come online when I go home to my own place and that is every third or fourth week or something like that. I hope for more frequent internet access though but I don't know when that will happen.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/29/2006
Hurrah! You're back! I must go and fetch a glass of milk for someone but then I hope to return to read.

Author Reply: Yes, I'm back again. :D

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/28/2006
Welcome back, Anso, and what a lovely story! Merry being lovingly tended by his cousins, the intricate way you weave us (and Merry) from the past to the present and back again... Very nice!

“Here, let me,” Pippin said, taking the spoon and filling it. “You’ve fed me on more than enough occasions. It’s time I got to feed you.” He smiled and said brightly: “Open.”

Awwwww. :D

Author Reply: Hehe. Thank you! :D

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/28/2006
Ah! Poor. brave Merry. Actually it is quite refreshing seeing Merry being the one who is so ill. I enjoyed the way you presented this Anso.

Author Reply: Thank you! Poor Merry indeed. Yes, I like to make him suffer and then have his cousins take care of him. :)

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