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A Father On The Road  by French Pony 14 Review(s)
KarriReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/21/2006
That was fantastic, FP. I loved the description of Thranduil. :-D Any chance you'll tell us the tale of how the Elvenking's little one ended up in that glade all alone?

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/21/2006
I really got pulled into that one!That was so very sweet.I am taking it the trees told the king what happened?I am really enjoying all these B-days Happy Birthday again Daw!!!

WyvernReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/21/2006
Excellent short story! Well phrased and compulsive to read. I look forward to more.

Richard

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/21/2006
Oh my goodness. A baby elf! A filthy, crying baby elf. How cute! Poor little thing. And Calum and Dugal talk about the baby like a forest creature, whose mother will smell them if they touch. It makes the elf sound so foreign! Which I guess is true.

It's also really true that most kids I know are distressed when they see someone unhappy. Maybe that's natural, especially if the kid has been loved.

I really liked seeing elves from the human perspective here.

Thanks so much, FP. I think I'll have to have birthdays more often. Oh wait. Maybe not. :-)

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