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| Glorfindel's Begetting Day by Nilmandra | 21 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/10/2006 |
| My favorite part of this was the talk about running in the halls etc when several conversations were going on at once. That was so natural sounding! But I also liked the general sense of joy and play these elves exhibit. Happy birthday, Gwyn. Author Reply: Frankly, all of the elves were reminding me of 'The Hobbit' elves... they enjoyed life and lived it fully. I had Elladan in the conversation too, and it was too much. The whole thing collapsed in on itself. | |