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| Beyond The Dimrill Gate by Jay of Lasgalen | 224 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/4/2009 |
| Ah, I'd been wondering if Bilbur might have been female! Heh! Glad I was right! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/4/2009 |
| You are delighting in evil cliffhangers, aren't you? Heh! Now--what has happened to Bilbur? | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/4/2009 |
| Now THERE'S a declaration to stop Farin in his prejudices! Heh! That Elf-witch IS the mother to the wife of Elrond of Rivendell, after all! And I'd never considered that they might have misidentified the terror that dwells in Moria as a Dragon. Yes, it makes sense, even though WE know it's not. Excellent--a group to precede Balin's company. | |
| Bakoneko | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/3/2009 |
| I've really enjoyed this story! You really showed us Estel beginning to grow into the man that we'll know as Aragorn, and I love how you handle the twins. And the dwarves are such three-dimensional, likable characters as well. Thanks so much for sharing it! Author Reply: Thank you for reviewing this. The twins are my favourite characters, so I find them easy to write, but I'm glad you find the dwarves came across well. I haven't written about dwarves much before - but I think Bilbur will have to reappear one day. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/3/2009 |
| And not enough experience to recognize a balrog when he sees it! They need to hurry indeed! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/3/2009 |
| Just what they need--more orcs! But if these somehow manage to clear the way and then get tidily killed.... | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/2/2009 |
| Indeed, an excellent means of explaining all the dead orcs at that particular intersection--we KNOW they tend to hate one another! Now--can they get Estel and Elrohir out the way Elladan got in? | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/2/2009 |
| Evil cliffhanger! Evil cliffhanger--or in this case, cliff-dropper! Good use of tension. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/2/2009 |
| Oops! Poor Estel--cornered by orcs! But there are two Elven brothers nearby who are likely to interfere with the "fun" of these two orcs! Love the detail! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/2/2009 |
| Bats leaving Moria at dawn would indeed be ominous. | |