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| Beyond The Dimrill Gate by Jay of Lasgalen | 224 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 5/24/2009 |
| A momentous ending, trembling with the future, but earned by the past. Great story, Jay. I'm sorry it's done. Author Reply: Thanks, Daw. I didn't think there was much point in going past this point and writing about the meeting with Arwen - it's been done before, and by a far better author! But now I need to decide which story to start next - I have several ideas :>) | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 5/24/2009 |
| Very nice ending indeed. I have decided not to leave this tale behind - I'm going to print it out and read it 'whole' and just relish the joy, horror, love and friendship contained within. Very very nice job! Author Reply: Thanks Agape! I hope you enjoy reading this over again, and that it's as good the second time around :) | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 5/23/2009 |
| Excellent ending and a perfect set up for the meeting with arwen. Very well done! Author Reply: Thank you! As I said to Daw, I wanted to set the scene for the meeting with Arwen, but not write it myself. Tolkien's already done that! | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 5/23/2009 |
| Ha!Ha! Very good ending Jay! and it was a good,good tale and much enjoyed even if it took awhile to read it. LOL!. Hugs The Imp Author Reply: Thank you for reading and enjoying this. It took a while to read it? I can't believe how long it took to *write* - just over three years! | |
| Grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/6/2009 |
| Whoops almost have a war between dwarves and elves there, I do like Bilbur's idea on who to have as envoy between the two places. Author Reply: It's odd - when Bilbur first appeared I had no idea she was female, nor that I'd come to like her so much. I hope Rúmon will learn from his new post as envoy ... | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/4/2009 |
| Ah--excellent! The Elf found reason to get out of Dodge for a time, and the brothers are finally home, apparently safe. And they still do not know they sensed a Balrog! And to use THAT particular epithet there was most ironic, of course. Now, to find what Gilraen thinks when she hears the tale.... Author Reply: I had to keep reminding myself that the Fellowship didn't know about the Balrog, so the twins and Estel couldn't discover it. Even Glorfindel didn't work it out ... | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/4/2009 |
| At least they are now out, and are not being pursued. The marchwardens aren't being particularly politic, however. Haldir was unutterably rude! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 5/4/2009 |
| Poor Nain! I was afraid such a thing might have happened! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/4/2009 |
| And still another evil cliffie? Ooh! Now, to learn how Elladan survived this--with Nain, I hope! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/4/2009 |
| Ah--well done, and worthy of Dwalin's son! | |