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The Last Age of Elves: A Precious Find  by fael bain 67 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/29/2006
Aha! Had wondered if this might be our friend Legolas! And a good wakeup call to Elrohir.

Author Reply: Indeed Elrohir needs to be jolted out of his ever-deepening misery, and who better to do this than a spirited Elfling.
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galimerilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/29/2006
Nice chapter, you did wonders for my mood. I just failed a geometry final (the second half is tomorrow). This is a great pick me up, almost better than the 5 pounds of chocolate and ice cream, well actually, this was better. I hope you have fun wherever you're going. Best wishes.
Eagerly awaiting more,
Galimeril

Author Reply: Oh no! =( I hate maths. And I am very flattered that you think this is better than chocolate and ice cream, although if you were eating a Häagen Daz chocolate ice cream fondue I think the competition would have been fairer. ;)
I'm back now, so the next chapter will be up within the next few days.
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eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/29/2006
Hooray, an update.
first I must apologize for not reviewing sooner, (I actually thought I did. LOL, it must be that pesky real life again). Lovely, lovely story here. The terrible twins are my favorite characters. I can't decide who I feel worse for Elladan or Elrohir, both seem to be in a lot of pain. Tell Elladan to keep hanging in there, his brother will be back. Elflings are hard to resist.

Update soon,

Eliza

Author Reply: I love the twins too! For some reason they've been taken and made into really workable characters from what little we're told in actual canon.
I agree that Elflings are hard to resist, especially one as cuddly as this fine specimen here! Hopefully he won't be too much of a Mary-Sue, but the jury is out on that one. The story is focused more on Elrohir, but I do see your point about Elladan being in a lot of pain. Thanks for pointing that out, and I'll try to see whether that can be taken.
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GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
You really capture the emotion of the moment, is the little elfling Legolas? Why is he out on his own? I can't wait fot the next update!

Author Reply: Thank you, Galimeril. You will have to wait for the story to unfold to find out! Well, I think some of it is pretty obvious, but hopefully your questions will be answered soon.
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JaylenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2006
Great start. Looking forward to the other chapters.

Author Reply: Thanks Jaylen. I hope you enjoy them as much as this one. x

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2006
A fascinating beginning here. And the fury of the suppressed emotions is very believable.

Author Reply: Hi Larner, thanks for your review. I was wary of making it too over-the-top with Elrohir, but am glad that you find it believable. Elrohir has a lot to deal with, and does it mean anything that I feel realy bad for putting him into this situation? x

BlaiseReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2006
I'm the first...Yeah!! I can't wait to get more insight into this first meeting of Legolas and Elrohir along with further info into that oft-mentioned time of Legolas stay in Imladris. I'm looking forward to discovering the foundations of Roh and Las...of how they save each other and form the bond that will only grow stronger. Can't wait!

Author Reply: Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I have to say it's been a plotbunny that's be nestled at the back of my head for ages now. it'll be really good fun to develop, and I can't wait to see where it will go from here too. Now I only hope it'll live up to all the 'hype'! x

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