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| It Was Only a Little White Lie by White Wolf | 17 Review(s) |
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| Nayru | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| Wow, whitewolf! This is really awesome how you foreshadow. The part where Aragorn will regret leaving Legolas! I mean it was cool! Author Reply: Thank you. I love foreshadowing. You'll soon see why Aragorn will regret his decision to leave Legolas. | |
| andromida | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| What a great start to a story and how funny but what is in the forest?please update soon thanks Author Reply: Thank you. What's in the forest will be revealed next week in the next chapter. | |
| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| Excellent beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter. I have read all of your tales and have enjoed them very much. Thank you Noor Author Reply: Thank you. The next chapter will be posted next week. I'm so happy you like my work. I hope to hear from you again. Author Reply: I knew it was you. You signed the review. :o) Author Reply: Sorry the second reply belongs to another review. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 | |
| awww man! i agree with Galimeril. you've done it again... and again... and again until we readers all die. you killed me with torture! you did that to me in your story "Dragonfire", and now you're doing it AGAIN! i have an idea here. any guys reading this will wet their pants, i think. well, you've done a great job with this story. it's actually scary, like someone telling a white lie and it turns REAL! ahhhhhhh!!!! like the other reviewers, i agree with them, i don't think that thing Legolas has to face is a spider, no matter how much it may seem to be. and Aragorn! he's a really good eavesdropper, probably from his ranger days, especially w/Elladan & Elrohir not hearing him. but if Aragorn had stayed after Elladan had gone, then he could have found out it was a joke and all that. but on the negative side, they wouldn't have gone hunting, and whatever that thing battling Legolas was would probably have gotten Imladris in danger. so in a way that prank was both helpful and harmful at the same time. i see you are updating next week, and "Dragonfire" in a couple of weeks... why does it take that long? mis.: plz visit my website, newly established: www.councilofelrond.com/members/LadySaruman , and if you are a member of that site then you can sign my guestbook. if you aren't a member, you can register @ www.councilofelrond.com . good luck with your next update! Hersheys kisses/hugs -Lady Saruman ^_~ Author Reply: Don't die! I want all my readers whole and healthy. Thank you. I wanted it to seem real. Of course, I can't say yet whether it's a spider or not. Aragorn has had plenty of practice eavesdropping. I think he may have to do a lot of it in self-defense from his brothers playing pranks on him. He and Legolas finally did figure out that the spider story was all a prank on Elrohir's part. Not thinking anything was dangerous, they just wanted to witness the joke on Elladan. Imladris may or may not have been in danger, but other people might have. It usually takes a couple of weeks for me to write a chapter and get it edited to where it is presentable to readers. The next chapter of this story is written and just needs a few touches, which is why it can be posted in a week. I'll visit your website as soon as I get the time, I promise. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2006 |
| First off- congrats on this story making 3 place. I do love the twins, and the beginning certainly peeked curiosity. I do wonder what exactly is coming at Legolas. It couldn't be a spider, right? Update soon! Author Reply: Thank you. I also love the twins. I thought, in this case, starting near the end and then going back and working through the rest of the story was the best way to go. Glad it made you curious. Of course, I can't say what's after Legolas, but I hope to update next week, so you won't have to wait too long to find out. | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2006 |
| AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN!!!!!! Not *another* cliffie!!! You are so *EVIL!!!* I love your story, you always make it seem so real! I can't wait for you next update! You should have gotten First Place for this one!!! Author Reply: I try not to be evil, but that was just a good place to end this chapter. Thank you. Saying my stories "seem so real" is a wonderful compliment. I hope to update next week. There are always some great stories for each of the Teitho Contests, so third place is an honor. Glad you thought it should have won. | |
| Brenda G. | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2006 |
| OK, I'm on the edge of my seat already! When is the next chapter up?? This is good stuff! Author Reply: I'm glad I was able to get your excitement up. I will update next week. | |