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| Little Elfling Lost by sheraiah | 13 Review(s) |
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| Miss Aranel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/20/2003 |
| A good read! I liked the way you introduced the characters in the story...it just gave it a more real feel. Pannad is right...little Legolas saw lots of things that little ones shouldn't have to be exposed to. The coping was believable, and captured very well. I was happy when he was reunited with his Ada. : ) --Aranel | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/20/2003 |
| An excellent story! Filled with nice little details that to build a complete picture. The story is very well written, too. I especially liked how you handled the accents. Usually when accents are attempted, the characters using them end up sounding like caricatures rather than real people. But I never felt that way with these. Well done. | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/20/2003 |
| You captured the fear and the uncertainty of not being able to speak the same language very well. The human family was very loving and very kind, and I was so glad to see Legolas from a wonderful, loving home. I think if I were him, though, I would never have let Elladan and Elrohir leave without me - no matter how nice the family, I'd have been chasing off down the road after their horses and begging to be taken home! Overall, a very nice story. | |