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| When the Dwarf Came A-Visiting by Miriel | 40 Review(s) |
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| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/20/2003 |
| lol, a wonderful story! Always full of such humor! I feel bad for Bilbo though, can you imagine what a mess and all , from beginning to end, though more would be wonderful! ;) Thank you for such time in this story! Loved it! Author Reply: Thanks again Hai! More what? More mess? Just wait a few chapters... | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/13/2003 |
| lol! Did Merry just faint?! *giggles* Wonderful absolutely wonderful! I hope Sam gets off as easy as Merry has, so far anyway. Loved it! Lot so fun, thank you so much for such hysterical entertainment! | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/6/2003 |
| LOL! I bet Merry is a bit concerned! Not only do they clean egg off the floor but they also have to clean other stuff off the furniture! I also liked Merry's reaction to Sam asking if they could stop Bombur from snoring! This is prefect on Mondays! Gives me something to look forward to after school and all, especially if it is a bad day! Thank you for such fun, I'm looking forward to more! Author Reply: Maybe more than just a bit concerned. I'm glad you like it on Mondays, if you didn't, I would change it. I completely understand about school.(Yuck) Thank you! | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 9/29/2003 |
| I guess you can't really blame Lily for liking Frodo to the point of tricking herself into thinking he liked her. I did like that, though, what a time! Pippin did some nice quick thinking, lol, love it. Looking forward to more! Author Reply: What a time indded! I really enjoyed writing that part. :) Yes, Pippin is quite the quick one. As far as updates go, I've fallen into updating every Monday. I'll hear from you then! Cheers! | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/22/2003 |
| lol! I loved Frodo and Pippin hiding under the cart! Wonderful! I liked Pippin's little thought there at the end "What mad it even more painful to my ears was the fact that Frodo and I were screaming too". Loved it. Looking forward to more! Thank you! | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/19/2003 |
| lol! Poor Merry, now all covered in egg. How sad the Frodo immediately assumed Pippin stole what he was eating, though I would have to say it proably serves Pippin right. And what does Frodo want a rose for? Surely he isn't falling for someone! Guess that can't be helped, if it is the case ;) Looking forward to more! thank you! | |
| Orangeblossom Took | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/18/2003 |
| This is such a cute story, Miriel! I especially like little Pip's POV. LOL. | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2003 |
| I love it! I hope Merry doesn't have a lot of trouble once he realizes that he is alone with Bombur! If he ever wakes up that is ;) At least Pippin is getting something good to eat while at the market! Lovely tactics. Can't wait for more! Thank you!! Author Reply: Actually, I hadn't considered Merry at all, but as you will see in the next chapter, thanks to your comment Merry's own escapades with Bombur are being told. So far, you've given me several ideas with your reviews. Thanks so much!!! | |
| Obelia medusa | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2003 |
| Very nice! I love your Pippin. He's a cutie, and his pov is great. :D | |
| Obelia medusa | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/15/2003 |
| Hello! I came to read the story you recommended (as I usually do, sooner or later!) and am quite enjoying it. Very light and funny. Love the dwarf. :) OK, going to read the rest now... Author Reply: I'm so very glad that you did! Yes, BOmbur happens to be one of my favorite Dwarves! When I read The Hobbit, I could practically recite the part at the beginning where Bombur fell on top of Thorin, Bifur, and Bofur. Heehee. Also in LOTR where he became so fat that it took 6 young dwaves to carry him! | |