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| When the Dwarf Came A-Visiting by Miriel | 40 Review(s) |
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| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/23/2003 |
| I like how you ended the story with Pippin relating Bombur to Gimli, and I can imagine that everyone is glad Bombur is gone. But about the shirt...? We never got to see Frodo "blow his top off" when the stains wouldn't come out (or did they) oh well. It was still a very, very good story and thank you for writing it!!! Author Reply: Oops. I completely forgot about the shirt. Hm...I think that egg washes out of clothing, so logically...hm...I have an idea! An epilogue! Be right back. | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/23/2003 |
| Pippin cut up the sheets for hankies! Why am I not too suprised. That sounds just like him! But what about Bimfur and Bofur? Don't tell me the other nine are going to show up as well. But wait, there's only one more chapter? How is all of this going to be resolved in one chapter? Well, best find out straing-away. Here goes! | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/23/2003 |
| Poor Pippin, having to clean the dirty hankies! I think I might also want to be sick if stuck in his place! And I know what you mean about Pippin's ill childhood fics, though I think you should also give Frodo a break too! He deserves it more than any other Hobbit in the books. Author Reply: Lol, forgot about Frodo. Hm...perhaps another fic? | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/23/2003 |
| Fantastic! The scene when they're dividing up kitchen chores, resembles the arguments between me and my sister on many occassions. I could totally picture it! Made me think of Merry and Pippin at the Party in FOTR. And as far as Bombur's snoring is concerned, I'd probably be mad at Pippin for mentioning it too, even if he didn't actually do anything. | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 10/23/2003 |
| Yes, I know exactly what you mean about the review thing. For the first chapter of "More than Mithril" I have a total of 62 hits and 2 reviews! Just for the record. I am absolutly loving this story, I've always thought Bombur was a sad excuse of an adventurer and somehow never thought that he might have both the energy and motivation to visit Bag End, but I like the idea... a lot. And just out of curiosity, why does Frodo like that shirt so much...? Author Reply: I don't know why Frodo likes the shirt so much...maybe because: a) it's soft b) it matches his eyes or c) Merry likes it. Thanks for your review! Glad you enjoyed the story. | |
| Elenar | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/23/2003 |
| I love that Bilbo doesn't let Gandalf in. I really enjoyed your story. | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/23/2003 |
| Well that was a lovely surprise! considering that the last chapter I reviewede I assumed was the last one, I don't know what made me think that! There was a lot of fun to be gleaned from the finish here! I loved how everyone got sick! Poor, Bilbo! though I must admit I laughed through the whole thing! I like you wrote it from Pippin's view! Wonderful! Thank you for such a fun story, I am sorry to see it end, now that it is really the end. I'm looking forward to more!! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/21/2003 |
| I like the fact that Merry is the one in trouble this time instead of Pippin. It's a nice change. Sam is very good in this one also. Can't wait for more. Author Reply: I get so tired of the chliches in fanfiction, I try to do something original and out of ordinary. I'm glad that I have suceeded. Thank you! | |
| Glovy | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/21/2003 |
| This is a wonderful story! I simply adore it. Also, I'd like to add, your a very good writer. Please, please, write more! Sincerly, Glovy Author Reply: Thanks! Don't worry, more is written. Thanks. No one's ever told me that before. *Blushes* | |
| MysteriousWays | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2003 |
| This is funny. I love it! I love the way you see the Hobbit characters escpecially. And poor Bilbo, I can just imagine how frazzled he must be with that of Hobit lads under foot. I only wish I had time at the moment to go on and read more of it. I will definately be back later to see if our visitor makes it through the door. Author Reply: Thanks for checking it out! :) You think Bilbo is frazzled now? *Laughs evily* Just you wait... Ok, then. *Waves* I look forward to hearing from you. | |