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If I had a Hammer  by Grey Wonderer 13 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 9/29/2005
Ah, dear--Frodo also has a competetive streak, obviously! Lovely image, him unable to talk with his mouth full of sour grapes.

Now, I, too, wonder where Pippin has got off to!

Author Reply: I could see Frodo thinking he was all alone with nothing but a big bowl of grapes and a bit of time on his hands. LOL

I'm sure Pip will turn up in another chapter.....More soon. Thanks for the review!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 11 on 9/29/2005
LOL LOL LOL Frodo, drooling all over from the grapes in his mouth!!!!! Gotta love it :) :) :)

But . . . where *is* Pip?

Still a wonderfully enjoyable story :)

Author Reply: Poor Frodo got caught in a less-than-dignified moment, didn't he? I could just see him doing this, though. At least I didn't let Merry catch him. He might never have lived that one down.

More on exactly where Pip is before long. Thanks for reading!

SlightlyTookishReviewed Chapter: 11 on 9/29/2005
Heehee! That opening sequence was so funny! Poor Sam, thinking that Frodo was choking to death (and poor Frodo, for his embarassment). But what I'm really curious about is Merry's dream. I'd forgotten about it and now you brought it up again. It's creepy! I want to know what it means...
*sigh* I really love this story! :)

Author Reply: Glad I made you laugh. For some reason I could see Frodo doing this and thinking that there would be no one around to catch him. I could also see poor Sam panicking the minute he saw Mister Frodo choking. There will be more on the dream and more of the story. Thanks for reviewing!

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