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Duel of Strength  by Cierah 12 Review(s)
viresseReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/6/2005
One twin saving the other - it's classic! And write well! I always love to read this kind of story. Being the eldest, I think it's natural that Elladan will try to keep Elrohir from harm. I like how you describe Elrohir's reaction when he lost Elladan and when Elladan's chest hurt.

FirestarReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/3/2005
I can't believe you haven't received a review yet at this site! I'm glad that hasn't kept you from posting as much as you have. I hope another chapter comes quickly so we can find out what happens. I can't wait to see the mens' reactions when they find out just what the twins really are.

I also really like your characterization of Elrohir. I can definately imagine him acting as such, especially when Elladan is in danger.

Keep up the good work.
-Firestar

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