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A Good Man is Hard to Find by Wordweaver | 25 Review(s) |
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Lamiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005 |
This is certainly an intriguing premise, and your style is clear and makes for an entertaining read. I shall be interested to see where you go with this. | |
Galatyn Renner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005 |
"Wrapped in his weathered cloak....Strider the Ranger had returned." This paragraph made me almost happy for Aragorn. I liked the way that you recast the events of Appendix A. THey seemed to support Aragorn's actions. I also like Aragorn's plan to return as Thorongil...again. I will follow this story with great interest. G. R. | |
Julia | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005 |
What the heck is up with Aragorn? If he was so unsure of Arwen's returning, he should have gone with her and had Faramir take over until his return, or let her go and then gone to escort her home in a couple of months. Poor little Eldarion, thinking he's going to have to take over as King of Gondor at age 12! I hope Leggy can find Aragorn before something bad happens. If I was one of Gondor's enemies, I'd think this was a perfect time for an attack with the King gone. | |
grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005 |
Like the frst chapter of your story. The differences of time between a elf and man. Aragorn should have gone with Arwin, to make sure she came back after awhile. He could alway have used a vacation. Looking forward to more | |
Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005 |
Interesting start. Aragorn is very insecure, isn't he? Arwen only wants to go and visit her brothers and grandfather. If he thinks she'll forget to come back, he could arrange to join her in a couple of months and escort her back. Manipulative, too - even if he thinks his reasons are impeccable. He's made it practically impossible for her to get out of the city. If he thinks this is a good way to get her interest, he could be proved wrong! | |