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Dear Diary  by Lily Dragonquill 103 Review(s)
DesideraReviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/17/2005
Very very sweet chapter!!! sorry it took me so long to review it!
Drogo is a great hobbit, worrying about his child! And Primula is so strong and confident - a real mother. And they're so much in love. The setting at the river was chosen very well, it fit the mood. The wind...*sigh* I get all romantic reading it. I thought Primula's comment about Drogo trusting her so sweet! Thanks for the great chapter!

Author Reply: Thank you for the sweet comment!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/1/2005
Beautiful.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/1/2005
I find myself waiting for that next small movement with Primula. Thanks for writing this.

Author Reply: I was waiting too, but things (un-)fortunatelly take their time.

Thanks for reading.

ArielReviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/1/2005
I am constantly impressed with how much better each and every chapter of this fic is from the previous one. You are becoming a wonderful author, Lily, right before my eyes, and it is a joy to see! Bravo!

Author Reply: Thank you so much!
Without your help I would never have come this far.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/31/2005
I'm enjoying this story so much. It's impossible to forget about what will happen to this family... eventually... but little phrases like this --

"There is so much love and joy in his eyes I cannot do other but embrace and kiss him again."

I just melt.

:D

Author Reply: I can make you melt? *squee*

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/27/2004
I love these diary entries so much, and this one is extra soft and gentle and loving and happy... *sigh*

Frodo is so very *wanted*. What a blessing for any child.

Author Reply: Thank you so very much!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/23/2004
"Are you sleeping again or just resting? Do you feel my hand when it rests on my belly just as I feel you?"

Awwwwww!!!

:D

Author Reply: Primula is a dear, isn't she?

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2004
Another series I'm looking forward to following. Well written.

Author Reply: Thank you so much!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/13/2004
"A lot of warm hugs and baby-snuggling is very tempting, after all. Do you hear that, little one? You can be as snugly as you want to be. Your father and I will give you all the warmth and care you need."

Well, you have to know that just melted me into a happy puddle! You caught a fearful/hopeful mother's thoughts and feelings beautifully, I think. This child is coming into a loving home, and what could be better?

Author Reply: Thank you so much!
This child is coming into a loving home indeed - if only it would last longer than it actually does.

IorhaelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/5/2004
Yeah, Primula should know everything will be alright with her baby. And it should have been vice versa.

Author Reply: She should not worry too much, you're right.

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