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| Do not go gentle into that good night by frodo16424 | 16 Review(s) |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/17/2004 |
| Unless Eomer and Faramir have had an unrecorded adventure together; they would not yet be 'brothers in arms' since at this point they had never fought together. Good idea of bonding Eomer and Faramir through travels and tavern visits. However, Faramir is depicted as more of a drunken schoolboy here. Even drunk, Faramir is at least 36 years old and the Steward of Gondor; he would not throw balls of flour at the Steward's chair and especially not at his King's throne. | |
| Annis | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/16/2004 |
| again, well done! but much too short! please write more, and soon! | |
| Mysterious Jedi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/16/2004 |
| This is a good story, and I look forward to reading more; however, this chapter seems to not be wrapped or something. | |
| Patty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/16/2004 |
| Oh my, surely you're not stopping there! I love Faramir and must know quickly how badly he's hurt!! The dialogue about a little dagger hurting so much is extremely effective = I feel his pain. | |
| Annis | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2004 |
| a promising first chapter! I love the title,and can't wait to read more! | |
| JULES6 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2004 |
| Wow, I am enjoying this story already. I liked Faramir and love stories about him. Some really good writing here and a nice plot line to start the ball rolling. I could easily believe that he and Aragorn were friends and became friends. Hope to read more of this story. JULES | |