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Tell This Mortal  by Chathol-linn 51 Review(s)
LinsulReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/15/2004
This just keeps getting better and better....

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/15/2004
A sense of reality- Legolas isn't perfect. Nice. (hey, did I mention that I am a fellow TORCer?)

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/15/2004
Ooooh! Good stuff!!

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/15/2004
Oooh! I love the "needs" thing! Great writing, I especially love your descriptives!

Ooooh!!Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/15/2004
BRAVO! Wonderful ending!! Creepy about that invisible "hand" thingy.... Well, I'm off to read the next one!!

Author Reply: Glad you liked the creepy cold hand. I did my very best to make it chilling. Regards - Chathol-linn

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/15/2004
Hmmmmm... It doesn't seem plausible that she would have a such extreme reaction, unless elves have really been forgotten. *sadness* Great writing, anyways!

Author Reply: Hello! The Age of the Elves was over 120 years before this story took place and that is worth several generations of Mortals. But your point is well-taken. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Regards - Chathol-linn

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/15/2004
Wonderful descriptives, I am really enjoying this!! I could all most see Gimli!!

Author Reply: Thanks, Linsul. Gimli's delightful, irascible character will never grow old in the minds of Tolkien fans. Regards - Chathol-linn

LinsulReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/14/2004
Mmmmmm... nice!! I HOPE it won't become a legomance, but we'll have to see... I am interested...

Author Reply: Thank you for your interest, Linsul. Always a pleasure when a reader takes the time to comment. I look forward to your opinion. Regards - Chathol-linn

Painful_Blue_EyesReviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/26/2004
Oh my gosh. This has to be one of the best stories I hav ever read! The ending is absolutely wonderful!! I'm just speechless! Excellent work and beautiful, perfect ending!

Author Reply: Dear PBE, I am bowled over by your wonderful review. I am glad you liked the story. What happens to a Mortal on an Elven ship at the moment it passes into the Uttermost West? If Aerlinn / Willofain knows (and she does) she's in no position to say! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. Regards - Chathol-linn

maya_arReviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/17/2004
Bravo! It's very unusual to find a story featuring an OFC and Legolas that not only avoids all the standard Mary Sue cliches, but turns them on their heads. Well done! A moving and original story.

Author Reply: Hello, Maya, and a thousand thanks for reading and commenting on the story. I am especially interested in your remarks on the Mary Sue aspects. Was this story a Legomance? Was Aerlinn a Mary Sue? Thanks again for telling me you liked it. It feels great. Regards - Chathol-linn

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