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More Than Cousins  by Pearl Took 33 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/16/2004
I love Merry's note and the fact that Eglantine kept it and added to it. Such a shame that Merry wasn't there when Pippin woke up, but I am very glad that he did wake up for a minute or two at least. Looking forward to more. I read this one a very long time ago, but I am enjoying it again.

Hai TookReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/15/2004
Poor Pippin! He got himself all worked up, at least he has made some improvement! Merry adopting Pippin as his brother was beautiful! Eglantine signing his adoption as well was so sweet! Looking forward to more!

pipspebbleReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/15/2004
*weeping* Oh, Pearl, you are killing me here! Can hardly wait for the next chapter! This is just as sweet and angsty as it can be. Loving it, every single word!

Pips, sniffling and wiping eyes

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/15/2004
Awww, was smiling at Merry's tender care of his cousin and the reminescence of Pippin's birth and the reading of the "offishul" document... and then you leave me on the edge of my chair once more.

Sure hope the reconciliation comes soon!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/15/2004
I remember enjoying this story when you first posted it, and it is just as fine a read today.

I do like your tender-hearted Paladin. And Merry's recounting of the argument, taking the blame, sounds so much like him.

Glad to have a chance to revisit this lovely story.

white_riderReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/15/2004
Hi There,

You Know....I think this has to be one of, if not the, very first stories I ever read when I first started to read fan fiction...It's what encouraged me to carry on reading it, until now I am a very avid reader....Something that I totally enjoy, and love... It was excellent then, and it is still excellent now...I think it shows and proves beyond a doubt, that no matter how hard we may argue and fight with our loved ones sometimes, we never, ever, stop loving them.....If ever that happens to me, I often come back to read your story, knowing that afterwards, everything is alright with the world after all!!...Thank you..

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/10/2004
This chapter is so full of suspense! From Pearl reading the letter and papers to whether or not the poultices would work. Merry discovering Pippin's illness...

As I was enjoying this chapter, I just thought about how in your more recent stories you've inserted a bit of "faerie-like" stuff with Esme. Its a fantastic chapter/story without the suggestion, but it would've been cool to see those references here! Take care.

Pippinfan

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004
Such a beautiful chapter, Pearl. Pippin and his scarf--can't have him parting with that. You describe very well the Tooks quietly waiting for word of Pippin. Leave it to good old Pearl to get to the bottom of things! :-)

Pippinfan

pipspebbleReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/10/2004
Still lovin' this story! When I read it first thing in the morning it makes the day's wait sooooooooo looooooooong! Sure sign of an excellent tale! Well done and can't wait to read more!

Pips

melilot hillReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/10/2004
(I thought I left a review before, but apparently not.)
Oh, this is such a beautiful, sad story! I just can't wait for the next update.


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