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| Forsake Not the Future by Lindorien | 11 Review(s) |
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| Sphinx | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/5/2004 |
| Very nice. The progressing from past to present to future came across really well, and the last line of every paragraph is great. Author Reply: Thanks a lot, Sphinx. I redid the format a bit and added it as a second chapter. It is at the suggestion of one of the reviewers. Perhaps you could take a look and tell me which presentation fits better? Lindorien | |