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All for Her by SoundofHorns	23 Review(s)
lmw	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/19/2004
I feel so bad for Faramir, trying to figure out,still, just what it is that Eomer wants. But I still love Eomer. He is just so out of his depth for so much of his current life. I love the way you write these two. Author Reply: Thanks. I feel sorry for both, too. Eh, Eomer was asking for it...he completely hijacked Faramir's fic. What did he expect? To escape unscathed? Not! :) Seriously, lol, this WAS Faramir's story, once apon a time.

Drake	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/19/2004
"He was talking about food. Pervs. ;)" LOL! Where on earth did that come from? I reread parts, but it's usually the funny stuff. One of my favorite Gaer moments is when Faramir is telling him about what he thinks about while on the battlefield, and Gaer pauses and says, "You like lads, don't you?" Had me falling out of my seat with laughter. :)

Drake	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/19/2004
Yay! Review time. :) At least I hope I can finish one. Have to take my father to the doctor in 20 minutes. GO GAER! Can I ever say how much I love this guy? I don't think he's a crappy Rider of Rohan, though..... I think of him more as the quintessential Rohir. He may not be good with a bow (OMG, I just caught I wrote boy. That would've been a bad typo), but he can ride and he may be good with a sword and spear. And, I don't understand why he couldn't stay in Edoras and look after Eomer fi he wanted to. I'm sure Riders get paid somehow, but even if it wasn't enough, he could always try to become a member of Eomer's personal guard. Then everything would be covered, I'm sure. But, he's going to Gondor and I'm happy about that. :) Hey, maybe he can meet a nice Gondorian woman who's taller than he is. Somehow, I think Gaer would get a kick out of that, lol. Good thing Faramir did find his balls in that pond (ROFL!), and that he was man enough to tell Eomer he's sick and tired of going through ludicrous extremes and fighting all the time. But, I also feel sorry for Eomer for having to endure that thrashing. It seems, though, that everything will soon be coming into order. Eomer's really a good guy. He may be overprotective and selfishly clinging to his sister, but I can't fault him since he's lost all the rest of his family before even reaching thirty. Faramir should see that, too. Anyway, can't wait to see them becoming the best of friends. I'm sure that will bring along with it some really funny moments. :) Looking forward to more updates! P.S. Snuggles! I feel so special now. :) Author Reply: LOL, I'm beginning to think of writing a spin-off story with Gaer as the main character as everyone loves him so much. Hmm, he's my first original character. Maybe he can be in a book... You guys would buy that, wouldn't you? A medieval-type story about Gaer? I promise he'd be funny and have wacky adventures! ;) Anyway, he's not the best warrior, I'll just say that and while none of the Riders are perfect, Gaer REALLY can't shoot. There will be a demonstration later...among other things Gaer can't do, like jump 3 feet down a bank. LOL, I can't wait to write that. "Hey, Faramir..." Splat! Eh, Gaer wouldn't be a very good guard. He's too informal, he'd be chattin' Eomer up all the time, offering him bites of his food. LOL, that's not respectful, though Eomer would probably enjoy having him as a friend. And he will later, cause I haven't brought Gaer this far just for Eomer to muscle him out. Best of friends is soon to come...but not too soon. You all know me. I develop slow, but as I was assured yesterday by a friend, the best things take time. He was talking about food. Pervs. ;) Yeah, that's right...800 hit count on the chapter with the dry sex. WAAAY above the average. Author Reply: OH, that Gaer. I just reread something, he said about Faramir. "He's left his sense of humor in Mundburg...now we're going to have to muster and get it." It had me in stitches. I'm pathetic, lol.

Adamas	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
[Arwen has brains...what, was the scene where she said she wanted to be Eowyn because Eowyn wouldn't have to watch Faramir die shallow?] You’re right about Arwen … what’s that old saying “still waters run deep”. The age comment was perceptive of her, and she is probably in a bit of denial about her Father leaving. The puppy is a good enough distraction. I just wanted to use my mall-crawler joke. [Poor Eomer. Faramir had to go to the harshest, most extreme lengths ever to get through to him.] I love Eomer… he can be as thick as a brick, but that’s his charm. I think behind all of his big tough guy image is a very big hearted, lovable guy. And I know that Faramir and Eomer are going to be buds. MacGyver/Faramir…Lol that is totally right on! And, yes you are a miniseries, so you better not cancel yourself or I’ll have to write the sponsor and protest. I can’t say when the last time I enjoyed reading fanfiction as must as I enjoy reading your story. The added bonus is the reviews … its like your very own discussion group. By the way what Fan81981 said is a big DITTO!! I could not have said it better. I think about whether you have updated all day at work and I am overjoyed when I find you have. During the long waits I go back and re-read chapters. Now get back to typing and update us with all those hints I just read about Faramir & Eowyn. ;) Please. Author Reply: Oh, they're going to be buds all right...(hint alert!) Hee, I've got some very very heartwarming scenes planned. :) Remember Eomer's comment, "...and hugs." Ha! Poor guy. You guys know what? I reread chapters too...but the pathetic thing is I love them and at the end can't wait to go on...WHILE I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE NEXT AND BEYOND. lol. I'm a loser. I work for 2 hours today, I'll start the next chapt. then. :) Gotta go on with the Eomer/Faramir saga. Author Reply: Also the rereading many of you people have confessed to explains the oddly high hit counts on the chapters with Faramir/Eowyn goodness. You pervs. ;)

Jen	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
Just like one of the previous reviewers, I want to thank you for sharing your talents with us. This is really a wonderful story and I look forward to each update. I want to commend you on the last few chapter and for the skill by which you have transitioned the story from the relationships of the main characters to one another how they stand when they are all apart. The scene in the forest between Faramir and his students was great. I really admire the detail that you provide and the bit about the bird was sweet. These students are really lucky to be learning from someone who has skills not normally found in the Riddermark. I wonder if Eomer plans to have these students teach others so the skills would not be lost. Really like Gaer too and the suggestion that maybe he can go to Ithilien to learn to be a ranger. Maybe he can also teach the Ithilien Rangers a thing or two about being a Rider of Rohan. The story about Eowyn and Arwen is cute. Goes to show how sometimes one never knows the path that your life takes. How could Rusco have known that he would end up living the life of luxury. I will, however, disagree with the other reviewers about the scene with Eomer. Although it was good that Faramir finally voiced his unhappiness, I thought he would have done it differently. I was just disturbed by the portrayal that Faramir makes a point and shows his strength by humiliating others -- first the soldier in Meduseld and now Eomer. I thought that with his patience and control, that he would do it differently. After all, he showed infinite patience with Frodo in Ithilien even though he was under tremendous pressure from his father and Mordor. Unless you think that this is a learned action from his father who probably did the same thing to him. Also been looking for scene for Faramir to show his skills as a leader. There has been a lot of scenes with his background as a Ranger, but not as someone who was eventually the Captain-General of Gondor. Maybe it would be during that hinted scene of Faramir saving Eomer? But I really like this story and can't wait to see if Eowyn would be setting a new hairstyle trend in Meduseld or being the pin up girl for the slogan, "do not let the queen get near your hair." Author Reply: I liked the birds and all the student scenes. Eomer doesn't have plans, lol, he lives off the seat of his pants, probably something he learned as a Marshal and trying to second guess all his info from Grima. That's interesting and something I caught too--the humiliation factor with Faramir's two "victories". (I say that like I didn't write it, lol) Now, I believe with Oswyn it was justified. Faramir gave this man no reason (that I've given you yet) to insult and attack him, so this was a fairly reasonable punishment. And I think it's reasonable that Gaer fears coming reprisal that has more man-power behind Oswyn this time since it was humiliation. And, if you're patient, I will show more of Faramir's compassionate side. But, I have shown, I think, that Faramir didn't really enjoy this fight. It was more of a dirty chore. Éomer is different. He pushed and pushed Faramir essentially to the breaking point. I mean, he told him everything Faramir wanted to hear and since Faramir can read his emotions he knew none of it was lies but then Eomer went right back and ruined it all with his remark. So? Faramir snaps a little and lashes out. But then he immediately gives in--perhaps he sensed he'd gone too far? We don't know yet because we ended on Eomer's POV. Faramir might have some things to think about in his POV in the next chapter. All in all, I can say he doesn't enjoy it in a sadistic fashion. Sure, its a brief sense of satisfaction he's getting such a reaction but he didn't prolong the torture any more than he had to. If my Faramir were truly cruel he would have. Personally, I thought it was on the too strong side--Eomer came damn close to crying and yes, that wasn't the best side of Faramir at all. I agree that he could have done it differently. But he did not, so that's what we got. And the learned explantion could fit--I wrote up earlier in the chapter that Denethor disliked cheek and I've made in my story that Denethor was an asshole to Faramir. (later there will be more and different memories since Denethor isn't so 2D as he appears) *Faramir/Eowyn bath time scene, wink, wink* lol, a shout-out to 'Better Than Sex', you could say, though it won't be the same plot. Unfortunately. Basically, it would have taken a lot to break through to Eomer and make up his mind altogether. This is how it happened and there won't be any more in case you're wondering I'm going to make Faramir bully him around and hold it over his head. Faramir has only been leading these boys. He's not in the position of leader in the company, so, naturally, why would he assume the role of leader? But, he's now with Eomer and Eomer is a younger man so perhaps Faramir will take the role of gentle, friendly guidance here. Also, Faramir has interaction with Gaer outside the company, he's definitely the leader in that! :D LOL, Eowyn's hair. We'll see if she likes it.

Drake	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
Man, I'd love to leave a long review, but I have to take the car to the shop now. :( Maybe later today or tommorow. Anyway, just as a quick note, Eomer was 27 and Eowyn 23 during the events in TTT and RotK, which didn't go far into the year 3019. So, since it's close to the end of the year, they'd likely be 28 and 24, and Faramir would be 36 if his birthday came around. I think. Also, Faramir is the same age as Sam. And Merry is older. Most people don't know that. :) And, if there's snuggling go on, can I get snuggled too? I'm no Karl Urban, but I'm not that bad looking a guy. :/ Great Chapter! Will review more later! Author Reply: Further proof I cannot do mathematics. ;) Take note, readers, and have sympathy if I screw up again. aw, throwing a snuggle your way, since you asked.

Chibi-Kaz	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
“Never jump out of the bushes like that at me again, would you kindly? I thought my heart would stop and the next thing I would see was the candlelit halls of my forefathers and my sire scolding me for suffering such a disgraceful death.” ROTFLMAO!!!!! Brilliant chapter, and well worth the wait (even though I hate waiting...). I LOVED the confrontation with Eomer. It was about time that Faramir revealed he saw through all this crap. He really is much older than Eomer, and has gone through a lot more and survived a lot more. At the same time, I'm glad that Eomer let go of his irrational behaviour. Sisters grow up. They find love, get married, move away. Why should Eomer's life be any different than any other big brothers? He's a rather selfish being, but young, so young. Eomer of the Mark is what, 26 tops? At the then end there, I just wanted to snuggle poor Eomer! Time to grow up, laddie. You're a King. Act like it. So, brilliant job. Don't make us suffer too long waiting for the next bit. Cheers, Chibi-Kaz Author Reply: LOL, I love Gaer. He's wonderful comedic relief. I seriously can't wait for the clash of Faramir's Not!Boyfriends--Gaer vs. Beregond in Minas Tirith. Hee!! The City, she will never be the same. Oh, yes, Faramir's showing his maturity here. He does have 7 years on Eomer and 12 on Eowyn, so he's really got more experience. Actually Eomer is 29 since he's got five on his sister and she's 24. Eh, I've met more assholish people that were way older and never changed. Eomer can and will change. Aww, I wanted to snuggle Eomer, too. Of course its not because I picture Karl Urban and Karl's a total hunk of a man...lol. ;) I'll try not to make you wait too long. These cutesy parts where Eomer and Faramir bond are just itching to get written but they'll take lots of going over to make them right.

Elendiari22	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
Hurrah! I'm so gad you updated. I almost danced when Faramir challenged Eomer at the end. They needed to have that little spat. I'm glad they've decided to end their strife. Faramir and his students are awesome. I love what you write with them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Author Reply: Oh, the "You're OLD, Laerow" bit? That was too cute!! Faramir and his students are the best and wait until you see how much they love him! :) It'll be a bit surprising and make Faramir really show off his skills as a teacher and try to instill some good Gondorian values in these heathen kids. :D I can't wait to write more.

fan81981	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/18/2004
This chapter finally got me to review. Most of the time I am too busy reading, and re-reading the chapters to have time (especially since I am doing this from work. Lucky that my boss has taken a day off). By far, this is one of the most impressively detailed and well-thought stories I have read. I am sure you have published if it were not for inconvenient legality of copyrights. I am sure Tolkien would not mind. Sixty-five chapters and I still find that the thought of you ending this fic saddens me. Though I am dying to find out what happens in the end, and how you resolve the tension, I don’t want the fic to end. I regularly check the site to find out if you have updated. I wanted to thank you for the time and the effort you have made on the story. It is much appreciated and makes my work day. The sensual scenes between Eowyn and Faramir especially leave the silliest grin on my face all day. They are most tastefully done and fit into the general character progression. Though I honestly would not mind a little more ‘action’, I am in awe at the restraint and innovation you show when writing the love scenes – for love scenes they are. I have re-read them often enough to note the lack of clichés in them. I wonder if you have to re-write them for they progress so naturally that I cannot be certain if you wrote them all in one go. I love your portrayal of Faramir, though I often want to knock his head and wish him to be more aggressive. I was so pleased when he finally cut Eomer down. I know that as a brother, Eomer has a reason for behaving the way he does but I am so completely in love with you Faramir that I don’t care. Though I must say, you interpretation of Aragorn is a little difficult to accept. He is most clueless, especially when it comes to his wife. This is probably because we see the couple from Eowyn/Faramir/Eomer (i.e. humans) point of view. They, especially Arwen, must seem incomprehensible. I actually like the fact that Arwen is spoiling the dog – that streak of childish pique is great, makes her all the more real – though from Eowyn’s point of view, a little silly. One of the best things about the fic, in my opinion, is that you don’t try to reason away the enigma that new relationships present. As a new author, I know I am guilty of providing reasons for my characters so that the readers will not condemn them. It is hard not to be didactic and just explain, as an omnipotent narrator, the “whys” and the “why nots”. It is impressive that you avoid that. How easy would it be for you to state what the characters are thinking in an authorial aside. But instead you take the difficult way and slowly show us. For me, that keeps me coming back and inspires me to be more careful when I write. Thank you (and apologies for the essay). Fan81981 Author Reply: No apologies, necessary, I'm wearing the silly grin now. Thanks for all your praise--it just makes me want to write more and try harder to make it all the better when I do post. :D Actually I write most of the story in one go, as much as I'm inspired for the time I can sit down and then when I'm not paticularly inspired I go over and over and OVER what I've done to make sure it's like I want it. Can I let youg guys in on a little secret here? This story writes itself. Seriously, I sit and let it go and play just like a little movie. Nothing to it. Oh, I might have to struggle for word choice here or there but the majority? Easy as pie. I know, it makes me sick, too. :) The sensual scenes are really not that hard for me since, like I said the story writes itself but I'm so glad everyone seems to find them good. I'd like more action, too, and we'll get it because hey, there's been no nookie for a fortnight by the time Faramir and Eowyn meet up again, wink, wink. :D And I've got something planned... Damn, I wish I could just sit all day at a computer and do this! Aragorn..ah, sometimes I think of getting inside his and Arwen's head and you know, giving some explanation...and then I realize I have WAY too much to do with the whole Eomer/Eowyn/Faramir triangle. Sorry. But I think what you're saying with us seeing the Aragorn/Arwen relationship from the outside is correct. Most of it isn't shown in the action of the story, which I regret but have you SEEN the size of these chapters?! LoL, maybe when I edit this monster I'll add what I can. Hmm, now I've written an essay.

Adamas	Reviewed Chapter: 64 on 11/17/2004
I just have one thing to say - GO FARAMIR! GO FARAMIR! GO FARAMIR!! Superb chapter, really it was excellent, from start to finish. Your transition from one scene to the next building the action to the climatic end was masterful. Excellent job! I loved the Eowyn, Arwen, and the puppy-shopping spree. I laugh out loud at the servant carrying the dog on pillow. I have to say as funny as it was - it was a little absurd. I hope that your Arwen has more brains then a shallow, bubble gum chewing, mall-crawler in America. It was funny really; I just think that being almost three thousand years old she should have more depth of character. I think Crimson has said it before; your Arwen is nothing like Tolkien, but I don't mind much, because I'm enjoy the story. Eomer and Faramir; I love these two guys. I love that Faramir finally called Eomer's bluff. I love that after having Eomer right where he wanted him he was gracious enough and man enough to forgive him and still offer him friendship. You are a Word Master. The dialog between them was perfect. I actually could see and hear it played out in my head, this is always a sign that the writer is skilled. Another sign is if you can capture the reader's attention and keep it in the moment, not looking ahead to the end or wandering off the page. You accomplished both in this chapter. Once again the ranger stuff was awesome. Where are you coming up with this material the survival handbook, or worst case scenarios? Ranger Gael… way to go on that idea. Anyway, you're good. I was completely overjoyed and amazed you had another chapter so soon. As always thank you for sharing your talent. I look forward to your next chapter. Wondering what will Eowyn's hair look like… Will the White Lady of Rohan be going to Gondor Bald? ... Will Faramir find out who is out to get him? ... What is going to happen at the upcoming harvest festival? ... Will Faramir and Eowyn have a roll in the hay? Stay tuned! Author Reply: Lol, GO FARAMIR. Poor Eomer. Faramir had to go to the harshest, most extreme lengths ever to get through to him. Arwen has brains...what, was the scene where she said she wanted to be Eowyn because Eowyn wouldn't have to watch Faramir die shallow? I didn't think so but it was probably overshadowed by the amusing puppy fiasco. Oh well. We'll see some supportive, intelligent, etc Arwen later. Oh, all the Ranger stuff is real. I've looked it all up on Google, actually, and referenced to make sure something is actually used, not just on one site alone. I've got games from some British boys club for later to substitute as Ranger Games, I've looked up herbs and their uses in medieval times--mainly Anglo-Saxon since Rohan culture is loosely modeled on thiers--and I've got lots and lots of stuff I haven't even touched on yet. Weapons, etc, I looked it all up so Faramir is a Tolkien MacGyver. LOL, that kills me everytime. Faramir: "Give me a stick, a handful of berries and a piece of your hair!" Ranger: "What?" Faramir: "Trust me, I've defeated orcs with less!" :D LOL! I can't wait for Ranger Gaer. This guy...if you think about it he's a really crappy Rider of Rohan. He can't shoot a bow, he's...ahem...skipping work to run around with Faramir so he's a slacker and he's a crappy brawler, too, as I'll show later. Hee! It's awesome, totally awesome when Oswyn, the man out to "get" Faramir actually comes to get him. Oh, man, the time with Gaer makes me giggle. Aw, you always compliment my character interaction. That makes me happy because I do go over it and makes me feel I don't deserve it because this comes so easily. Oh, and stay tuned! LOL, it's a miniseries now.

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