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| We Will Follow by PIppinfan1988 | 11 Review(s) |
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| Citrine | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/24/2004 |
| You've got a great story going on here so far! I like the way you write the dialogue, very smooth and natural, and very much in character. You also seem to have a good grasp of the Shire's geography, something I highly admire (because I'm not very good at it.) And of course I'm dying of curiousity to find out what happens next:) Author Reply: Enough action, I hope, to keep you on the edge of your seat! :-P Thank you, Citrine, for your encouraging words. Good gravy, I forgot to preview the final result last night and was appalled at the scrambling of the chapter title this morning! My apologies to you and anyone else for the mess. Now I understand the frustration Pearl Took was telling me about! Thank you again! Pippinfan | |