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Adoration  by Shireling 13 Review(s)
NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/14/2004
This is beautiful - the joys of a new baby :D

Author Reply: Yes it's a shame they grow out of that stage so quickly!!!

Helen

PuxinetteReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/14/2004
Perfection. Exquisite. What a gorgeous piece between Faramir and Eowyn. The baby's after-bath toilette. What a great moment with the new family. And then---your description of breast-feeding is beyond words, it is so exact and beautiful. Another great piece of writing by Shireling.

Author Reply: Puxinette

Thank you so much.

I'm not sure where this story came from, but once it hit me I couldn't leave it!!

Breast feeding was one of the most fulfilling experiences of my life.

helen

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/14/2004
This is wonderful. As I was reading, I was thinking I would tell you to change the rating, but by the time I finished, I realized what you were doing --amazing.

"She looks down into pools of knowledge, sees love and trust in the depths of a soul, so old, so young."

Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. I'm so glad I didn't know *exactly* what it was about until it surprised me!

Author Reply: Thank you,

I was hoping that the ambiguity would work but the image of the baby was so strong in my head that it was hard to be objective.

Helen

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