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marinus stiria  by bryn 2 Review(s)
Capn Jak SparrowReviewed Chapter: 16 on 12/20/2003
Uh oh... Poor Gimli! I hope Aragorn can save everybody!

The KarenatorReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/28/2003
Bergil is back. Batty is having a cryptic moment and Aragorn is scratching his head over why in all of Arda would Gimli leave his axe behind. I loved Aragorn's reply to Bergil when Bergil voiced his hope that the woman would ride the horse off a cliff. “Nay—the horse is too smart.” I agree with Bergil; that is a bit of the old Aragorn.
I have not quite gotten a handle on Hadeem yet. He's mysterious to some degree, but I can't tell which side his bread is buttered on. I wish Eowyn had a better translator, too. Little calling one's prize stallion a cow... can really disrupt negotiations. Men are so funny about stuff like that. You could probably call his wife...or wives, maybe, in his case...a sway-backed bovine fly catcher and that would be fine, but his horse! Oh, what dangerous ground we tread.
This is moving along well. You're juggling a lot of characters and keeping them in the fray. I'm ready now for the next chapter. :>)Karen

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