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| A Small and Passing Thing by Lindelea | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/21/2023 |
| It's a dire prognosis. Freddy's state of mind is still definitely mixed between the Lockholes and his freedom. | |
| jodancingtree | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/11/2003 |
| I'm thoroughly enjoying this! Just one quibble, though -- you sent Frodo off to bed, while Merry & Folco went to meet the Bolgers -- then suddenly Frodo is there with Folco, getting on a pony! Oh, it's lovely though, and so true-to-life, Freddy's confusion and all... jo Author Reply: My goodness, you're right!!! I meant "Merry" and said "Frodo"! Good catch! It's all fixed now, though, at least I hope I fixed all the discrepancies. Whew. | |