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| Of Finrod and Bëor by losselen | 2 Review(s) |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/19/2022 |
| It's really cool, and rather appropriate, that Finrod names Men as the Second-born". Another beautiful chapter. I wish you'd break up that especially long verse into two smaller ones, though... Author Reply: thank you for reading! i re-read it, and maybe agree here. there should be a break after the description of cuivienen ends, maybe. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/19/2022 |
| The last line made me shiver with anticipation. Beautiful poetry that puts me in mind of Tolkien's Lay of Luthien. Author Reply: thank you! i had in mind the lay of leithian as i tried to put down the mood for this poem as well. | |