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| Of Finrod and Bëor by losselen | 8 Review(s) |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/24/2022 |
| This was beautiful. Thx so much for sharing! Author Reply: thank you so much for reading!! | |
| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/22/2022 |
| Lovely, as they have all been. This makes me happy. :-) | |
| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/22/2022 |
| ❤️❤️ | |
| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/22/2022 |
| Agreed - it puts me in mind of the Lay of Lethian. :-) I can picture it all so well. | |
| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/22/2022 |
| Beautiful work! (Quick question - between 115 and 120, should it be ‘beguiled’ rather than ‘beguilded’?) Loving it. Author Reply: yup, that's a typo. thanks so much for reading this monster of a poem :> | |
| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/22/2022 |
| Lovely! So glad I came across this. I love to see verse written in Tolkien’s world, as he wrote verse in it himself. Looking forward to reading more. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/19/2022 |
| It's really cool, and rather appropriate, that Finrod names Men as the Second-born". Another beautiful chapter. I wish you'd break up that especially long verse into two smaller ones, though... Author Reply: thank you for reading! i re-read it, and maybe agree here. there should be a break after the description of cuivienen ends, maybe. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/19/2022 |
| The last line made me shiver with anticipation. Beautiful poetry that puts me in mind of Tolkien's Lay of Luthien. Author Reply: thank you! i had in mind the lay of leithian as i tried to put down the mood for this poem as well. | |