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Of Finrod and Bor  by losselen 2 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/19/2022
It's really cool, and rather appropriate, that Finrod names Men as the Second-born".

Another beautiful chapter. I wish you'd break up that especially long verse into two smaller ones, though...

Author Reply: thank you for reading! i re-read it, and maybe agree here. there should be a break after the description of cuivienen ends, maybe.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/19/2022
The last line made me shiver with anticipation.

Beautiful poetry that puts me in mind of Tolkien's Lay of Luthien.

Author Reply: thank you! i had in mind the lay of leithian as i tried to put down the mood for this poem as well.

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