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Of Finrod and Bëor  by losselen 8 Review(s)
PSWReviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/24/2022
This was beautiful. Thx so much for sharing!

Author Reply: thank you so much for reading!!

PSWReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/22/2022
Lovely, as they have all been. This makes me happy. :-)

PSWReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/22/2022

PSWReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/22/2022
Agreed - it puts me in mind of the Lay of Lethian. :-) I can picture it all so well.

PSWReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/22/2022
Beautiful work! (Quick question - between 115 and 120, should it be ‘beguiled’ rather than ‘beguilded’?) Loving it.

Author Reply: yup, that's a typo. thanks so much for reading this monster of a poem :>

PSWReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/22/2022
Lovely! So glad I came across this. I love to see verse written in Tolkien’s world, as he wrote verse in it himself. Looking forward to reading more.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/19/2022
It's really cool, and rather appropriate, that Finrod names Men as the Second-born".

Another beautiful chapter. I wish you'd break up that especially long verse into two smaller ones, though...

Author Reply: thank you for reading! i re-read it, and maybe agree here. there should be a break after the description of cuivienen ends, maybe.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/19/2022
The last line made me shiver with anticipation.

Beautiful poetry that puts me in mind of Tolkien's Lay of Luthien.

Author Reply: thank you! i had in mind the lay of leithian as i tried to put down the mood for this poem as well.

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