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The Letter  by Antane 4 Review(s)
TiggerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/16/2009
All the loud noises had brought a small audience to the door, unnoticed at first by the four combatants. Arwen and Rose smiled; Aragorn, Gandalf and Faramir softly laughed. As they watched Frodo gained the advantage for the moment over his cousins. He knelt over them victoriously, but it was very short lived as he lost his balance when he was pulled back down.

Pippin looked up then and belatedly saw that they had an audience. "Gandalf! Aragorn! Faramir! Come join us!"

"Yes, do!" Frodo seconded. "But on my side! I’m being overwhelmed!"

"Then Queen Arwen has to be on our side," the impetuous Took said. He looked at the Elven lady eagerly as Sam stared at him aghast for such audacity.

Arwen laughed softly. "I thank you for the invitation, Master Peregrin," the Elf said gracefully, "but I must decline."

"But I will not," Aragorn said and waded into the fray with a large smile.

"And I must defend my brother against these terrible assaults as well," Faramir said.

The hobbits squealed in delight and Arwen laughed as Pippin and Merry crawled over all their king and his Steward, trying to find a vulnerable spot with Frodo defending them as best he could, all of them laughing in unvarnished delight.


Well, if Arwen won't take part, then can I? Hmmm????

FOR GONDOR!!!! AND THE SHIRE!!! AND THE TOPS OF HOBBITS TOUCHY TOOTSIES!!

:oD

What a wonderful chapter m'dear. I loved it. If you couldn't tell that is. :o)



Author Reply: Well, no, actually, I couldn't so I'm glad you told me so! :) :) *hugs* I'm happy to have provided such entertainment! And feel free to take part yourself. :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/16/2009
Sam carried you up the Mountain, don’t you think he wants to carry you back down too?

What a perfect thing to say. And I enjoyed this latest 'conspiracy' as much as Frodo. :)

Author Reply: It was fun, wasn't it? I am trying to keep the angst down for you, you know. :) I have little idea where it's going to go from here.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/16/2009
A pillow AND a tickle fight. Just what the healer ordered.

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed, my dear!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/15/2009
Love the melee! Yes, love to see Frodo finally knowing some simple fun and reasurance. And both Frodo and Aragorn appear to gather brothers wherever they go!

Author Reply: Hantanyel, my dear Larner - glad you enjoyed! We'll see if Frodo picks up another brother by the end.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

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