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Stars May Collide  by Rose Gamgee 8 Review(s)
darksunReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/15/2004
What an absolutely wonderful and beautiful story. Honestly. The emotion, your display of characters, everything. It breaks my heart to see someone as meek as Diamond going through what she's going through. And Pippin. Ack! Such a lovely way you write him. So romantic. *Sigh* Hehe.

He kissed her hands again, his eyes bright with tears and longing, burning into her soul.

Oww, okay, pain.

Beautiful, dearest. Can't wait to see more!

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/8/2004
Oh, that was so sweet! Poor Diamond :( But at least you're into the most important year now. It can't be too much longer before the wedding happens (or so I hope :P). Good to see that Di's finally found someone she can trust to tell. I just hope the Opal keeps her promise.

You're forgiven for the big break between updates, but if it happens again, I may not be so forgiving ;P lol

ming eledhwenReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/7/2004
ahhh!!!!! *melts into a puddle...* *then remembers that rose hasn't updated for a loooong while * wohoo! you've finally updated! whhhhyyyy!?!?! did you take so long to give us such a fantastically written and angsty chapter? huh, huh, huh? oh, forget it, i'm still in puddles over the kissing scene...rain, cloak, kissing...perfect! keep it up!

ValerieReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/6/2004
Damn you and your skillfull angsty romantic writing! *sniff* I can't handle much more of this rising action. That was an evil, tantalizing A/N. What is going to happen in the next chapter?! This was written so well. So emotional. It made me REALLY wish that I was Diamond during that intense kissing scene :P. Good job!

Samwisegirl12Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/6/2004
Oh great, Rose Gamgee, thankie for this wonderful update. *bows*
Oh great, Marigold, thankie for being beta-reader. *bows*

That's so sad that they have to hide it!! *tear* Yay!! More!

~ swg ~

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/5/2004
I'm so glad you updated. That was beautiful.

Elendiari22Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/5/2004
Meh! Poor Diamond, I wonder what will happen next. I hope that they get caught, or can at least start into the process of engagement and whatnot soon. Lovely chapter!

HaiReviewed Chapter: 18 on 5/5/2004
At least Diamond tole her sister about Pippin, at always helps when someone else knows! I hope that Diamond and Pippin reveal this pretty soon! It would be better if they didn't have to sneak about, yet I hope it doesn't end when it all comes out! Looking forward to more, thank you!

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