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Stars May Collide  by Rose Gamgee 7 Review(s)
PervincaReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/7/2004
Wow, you managed to summarise the entire trilogy into one chapter! Great work there! You did it very well, with Diamond's interaction and sketching (that was a particularly nice touch!). Please continue soon, you are a fantastic writer!

ValerieReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/5/2004
I don't know whether I should praise you for writing such a wonderful chapter, or if I should strangle you for not writing a kiss on the lips :P. I got that happy twisty warm fuzzy feeling in my belly whilst reading this. You write their relationship so beautifully. It's so sweet and innocent and so full of love that it makes me want to cry! I serioulsy was thisclose to tears when Pippin was crying because he misses Frodo so much. Right now, my throat just contstricted thinking about it! That's how good this is! *bows* Thank you so much for this chapter, for this whole story! You seriously rule!

HaiReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/5/2004
I'm glad that you had Pippin tell Diamond everythign about the Quest! I like when there are no secrets between these characters! The idea of them meeting int secret was wonderful! I'm looking forward to more, thank you!

Samwisegirl12Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/5/2004
Yay!!! You've updated it!!!
Well, they've finally met again. and pip was able to tell her about his adventure. I love the part where he tells her what ernil e perianneth means. hee hee. They're so cute!
I agree with the other reviewers; this fic needs to be updated more often. But I suppose anything this good is worth waiting for.

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Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/5/2004
I love this as I had never thought of how Pippin would have to tell Diamond about his past. It is a mark of how much he loved and trusted her that he was able to share it with her. It is a wonderful chapter and makes their relationship so special. Please, keep going.

Elendiari22Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/4/2004
Oooooh! This is so romantic, I can just see them sitting in the moonlight talking. Excellent fic, it needs to be updated more often! :)

ChiggerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/4/2004
Good. They managed to make it through the night without interruption, but Pippin should have helped her through the window! :)

I'm glad to see that he finally managed to get everything off his chest, like Merry did in Faint Heart. I've always felt sorry for Pippin. At least Theoden didn't turn nasty on Merry. But I suppose they both had their traumatising experiences.
And Pippin's grief was written so well that I could see him, feel his pain, hear his sobs. It was wonderful.

The only thing that I could find that you might want to do something about, is the fact that Diamond was drawing in the middle of the night. Do hobbits have extra sharp night vision?

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