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Stars May Collide  by Rose Gamgee 8 Review(s)
Lisbeth K.Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/22/2003
I absolutely love this story!!! I couldn't stop reading. You capture the emotions perfectly. Please update soon. Maybe you cold work a miracle concerning Diamond's condition.

Samwisegirl12Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/18/2003
Yay! you updated! It was a WONDERFUL chapter, but I want more! -please?

~ swg ~

DollyReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/18/2003
I love Pippin in this story. He is so gentle with Diamond, I think he is the only proper friend she has ever had. More soon please, I am always looking for updates for this story.

HaiReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2003
A very pivotal point in your story, yes? You did a wonderful job with it! Poor, Diamond and how terrible of her paretns to make her feel like she wouldn't make a good wife because of her condition!! I liked Pippin's thoughts when she had fainted about a hero waking someone with a kiss! and how he thought Diamonds lips were "saccred territory" taht was beautiful! Looking forward to more, thank you so much!

Le RouretReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2003
Well!

I agree with your beta. This was a GREAT chapter! What a touching insight into the family -- and into Diamond's terrified acceptance of Pippin's attentions. Of course, he'll completely ignore the healer's assertions that she's barren, won't he?

Won't he?

Please?

Elendiari22Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2003
Oh, this whole story is excellent!! You have to write more, since we know that they do end up getting married. You've had me hanging since I began reading; please don't wait another month to update!

ChiggerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2003
YOU UPDATED!!!! FINALLY!! It was a truly wonderful chapter. Much as I hate eavesdropping and though I try not to, I can't help but find other people's conversations interesting. Pippin, you better go against the flow, here. I mean, come on, the poor girl's cute, isn't she?

coonzalasReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2003
that was a fantastic chapter, but did you absolutely HAVE to stop there?

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