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Kindred  by GamgeeFest 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/14/2011
Oh, dear! She's going to get Marcho to talk? I wouldn't want to be Marcho in that case. Love the title usage here.

Author Reply: She's certainly going to try! I think she'll find Marcho to be more stubborn than she expected. :)

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 15 on 11/1/2011
Oh my!

That was such a well-planned conspiracy!

If it was'nt for Lalia, I would see a chance for a good outcome, but with Lalia involved and her curiosity aroused, bad things might happen ...

Poor Marcho!



Author Reply: The Tooks know how to conspire! Only ones who do it better are Brandybucks. ;)

Lalia is going to cause Trouble, I'm afraid.

Marcho is fine, don't worry about him. He'll get his lass, I'm sure. :D

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/28/2011
Uh-oh.

The younger generation is the same all over: when one is brewing up trouble, the others are not going to say a word, and that's all there is to it. Clearly Ami had not been keeping the secret from her sister or Marcho, and Pally knew more than he ever let on. Even Rumbi knew about her correspondence with Sprig...

And of course it's all because they worry about the reactions of their elders.

But I'm blessed if I can figure out what Lalia is going to do...

Author Reply: They all acted out of concern for Ami - and the belief that the situation wasn't really that serious. Pally had certainly thought this was over long ago. Put all the little pieces together though and things start to look different. They're all realizing they've underestimated her.

Let's hope now their elders can prove them wrong. ;)

Oh, Lalia.....

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