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Pebbles From Arda  by Virtuella 103 Review(s)
spinsterReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/15/2015
A very touching and beautifully written piece. Thank you

Author Reply: Thank you! I'm rather proud of this little piece, so I'm glad you liked it.

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/15/2015
What a lovely glimpse of a summer day - both the picture and the story, which fit together perfectly.

Author Reply: Thank you!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Thank you so much, I just love this and it is wonderful to see my photo inspire a story I can read and enjoy. Love your young Boromir and Faramir.

Author Reply: Glad you liked it!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Oh, but how beautiful and perfect, Virtuella! I love the imagery, and that in the end Boromir found himself content enough to remain a boy while he still could. The tickling of the grass--I've felt that so often myself, and love the question as to whether the cygnets feel much the same. Delightful! And hail, Scotland!

Author Reply: Thank you. Scotland didn't come into it this time, though, the inspiration came from Cheshire.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Wonderfully done.

So much subtle revelation of the character they will grow into.

And the foreshadowing...

Author Reply: Thank you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
like girls, like boys, like children.

Perfect. This is a wonderful tale.

Author Reply: Thank you!

Nieriel RainaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/21/2014
Beautiful!

Author Reply: Thank you. I wrote this many years ago, so it's nice to get another review for it after all this time.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/10/2014
Have you been going through wedding throes? I swear that you have them down delightfully! I giggled a good deal! I certainly appreciate his feelings at the end! Poor father of the bride!

Author Reply: Thank you. Strangely enough, no, I did not write this from experience!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/10/2014
Such a joy to reread this! Yes, Gondor is awakening anew, filled with joy to awaken to this rebirth! So well expressed!

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/10/2014
Loved this on Teitho and love it more on the second reading. You utterly nailed male disinterest in weddings. Great job. Thanks.

Author Reply: Thank you, glad you liked it!

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