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If You Could See What I Hear  by cathleen 4 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 6/26/2008
Well, I have followed this through till the end, though, sadly, not leaving many reviews (forgive me).

My favorite line was Tulip's - that naps don't count. I loved the finding of the slingshot in the cave; I loved Oak, and so many other things.

I did enjoy it thoroughly. Very well written, a lot of fun, with enough anxious moments, and a good ending.

Thanks for sharing this.

Author Reply: I'm extrememly pleased to hear that you enjoyed my tale, and kept reading it right up until the end. Any and all FB, freely given, is, and always will be gratefully received. Thank you so much!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 6/11/2008
The brief look at the terrors and frustrations--and reassurances--known during the Time of Troubles is well done. And then at last Pippin is at home once more, and all rejoice that this is so. A most apt ending, and a joy to realized that Pippin actually met Eolande.

Author Reply: Yes, I thought he should have the opportunity to meet Eolande. As ever, Larner, thank you so very much for all your generous comments! They have really meant a great deal to me.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 6/11/2008
Wonderful!! This was indeed the perfect ending, Cathleen :-) I love the understanding between Paladin and Pippin. I love how they were each comforted by their gift.



Author Reply: Thanks Pearl! It was a real challenge at times and I'm very glad it all came together at last, and that you liked it!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 6/11/2008
What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this adventure with us, Cathleen.

Author Reply: Thank you Shirebound, I'm so very pleased to know you enjoyed it!!

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