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If You Could See What I Hear  by cathleen 5 Review(s)
GoldenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/13/2007
Great Chapter. Finally she spoke to him. I canīt wait how it will continue. I donīt think Rhoswen is evil, so I not really fear for Pip ( well a bit maybe *g*), but I am veeeeeeery curious on what he will see and learn and of course how he comes back to his family in the end.

Author Reply: Never fear, Pippin will prevail, of course, and have tons of fun along the way! I'm *glad* you're curious! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, Golden!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/9/2007
I'm so glad she has finally spoken to Pippin :)

I love your descriptions of her part of the woods, all the brighter colors and everything seeming fresher somehow.

Poor Tulip! Eglantine really did put part of herself in that knitted piglet! Perhaps, she was thinking it would be a way to keep an eye on her rascal of a son ;-)

This is such fun!

Author Reply: Thanks Pearl! We'll see more of what Rhoswen has to say and what she is up to in the next chapter. I'm so pleased you're having fun with my story, thanks for the kind words!
Cathleen

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/8/2007
Hmm. Time can move strangely in the fairy halls.

Author Reply: Yes, it can, and I'm finding there are many odd things about faeries!
Cathleen

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/8/2007
Oh dear, I hope Pippin won't be irretrievably lost! He seems very deep into the spell of faerie, and is now in another realm altogether.

Tulip is such a wonderful companion. :)

Author Reply: Shirebound, Never fear, I would never let our Pip be lost forever! Lol, I'm pleased you like Tulip!
Cathleen

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/8/2007
Ah! This came out very nicely!

I am very curious to know what the faerie wants with Pippin, and why she chose to lure him away.

And of course, I'm concerned about his poor family, frantic with worry!

Author Reply: Thank you Dreamflower, and for your wonderful beta! We'll see more of the faerie in the next chapter and maybe she'll reveal more of her plans...
Cathleen

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