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If You Could See What I Hear  by cathleen 4 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/2/2008
Oh my goodness gracious - what a silly Hobbit! And poor Tulip - she must be beside herself from the cold and worry!

Author Reply: Yup, poor Pip is proceeding without a thought, as usual!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/13/2007
I'm so happy you're posting this here. I've been traveling, and haven't yet been able to get over to the Challenge stories to read them.

This is darling! I love Tulip, and I love Pippin's wonderful imagination in allowing this special playmate into his life. (And of course Tulip is most fortunate to have a lad like pippin to bring *her* to life.) I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Author Reply: Thank you so much Shirebound! I'm so pleased you like little Tulip - she has been a great deal of fun to write thus far and she has many more adventures ahead to share with Pip. The next chapter of this tale will start Pip and Tulip down a wee bit darker path so he will need her voice of reason. I so appreciate you taking the time to review this!
Cathleen

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2007
Hmm. Interesting to see him following this siren song, and I find myself wondering who sings it.

Author Reply: Someone who he is going to be surprised and fascinated with! Whether that's good or bad remains to be seen....
Cathleen

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2007
This is a wonderful tale and I adore Tulip!!

"His grin widened as the petulant piggy graciously accepted his regrets."

"petulant piggy" . . . I love it! I could just hug her.

Your young Pippin is perfect as well. I eagerly await more :-)

Author Reply: Thanks so much Pearl! I adore Pippin and enjoy writing him. There are so many facets to his character to explore. I'm so pleased you like Tulip, thank you for letting me know and for taking the time to review - always MUCH appreciated!
Cathleen

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