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The 500 Words Challenge  by Timmy2222 38 Review(s)
grumpyReviewed Chapter: 12 on 5/21/2007
I always thought the part in the book where Aragorn uses the seeing stone was good. You did a great job putting Aragorn thoughts on paper.

grumpyReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/21/2007
Good thing that Strider was released from this marriage, or Arwen would have had to go out and claim what is hers, Meanwhile the village will get a fine guard beast.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 12 on 5/17/2007
Sounds almost like a marriage between movie and book-verse here, and well done indeed, as this ought to have occurred in Helm's Deep with but one Hobbit in tow. But the determination is there, and the readiness to face Sauron and let him at last know what he faces.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/17/2007
And she finds a place among her own people. And love the realization there is another love for this stranger, and a great celebration to know when the day when he achieves it may come.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/17/2007
Okay, so this is her true consort--sounds like a lion? But how did it come to such a place, we wonders?

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 12 on 5/16/2007
Aragorn is just so brave.This must be a chilling prospect for him.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/16/2007
This has been a fascinating story which still leaves me hungry for more.Larina is truly intruiging.

grumpyReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/14/2007
I have been thinking, maybe they can make a deal with this beast, no killing and it can stay. Make it a nice hut, they can use it to scare off wolves, bears or whatever come along.

Author Reply: Great idea as always. ;)

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/10/2007
Timmy you still have me guessing,but I am really enjoying it, will wait for more!

Author Reply: Thanks for telling me!

RSReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/9/2007
So she does not have power over everyone! COME ON PROMPT!

Author Reply: Nope, she doesn't. And this little story comes closer to its end.

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