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| From Last to First by Songbird | 24 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/17/2019 |
| Wow!, what a story. Great imagination and creativity. I am in, please continue, you can’t leave us on pins and needles. | |
| kimberly | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 1/16/2013 |
| sweet. i like your story so far. you had me crying in some areas. I hope you continue your story, it is really good!! | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/25/2004 |
| Gave up awful quick, didn't they? Just proves Thranduil really didn't care for his son after all, if you ask me, but I thought Isal cared more. You don't lament the dead until you're sure they are, for heaven's sake! *disgusted with the lot of them* Young Randil is the only one showing any sense at all and he's an Elfling! | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/25/2004 |
| What a terrible education for legolas to recieve. I hope that evil human rots in whatever hell there was and the maid goes to the Halls of Mandos to never feel pain again. I'm assuming you're gonna let Legolas live, of course. :) | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/25/2004 |
| Glad there were no misunderstandings that led to tragedy, but everyone sure is taking their sweet time in rescuing Legolas! *on to the next chapter* | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/25/2004 |
| WHY didn't Isal TELL them Legolas wasn't Teril? Please don't let the brave little elfling die? | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/25/2004 |
| Who is the nasty speaker the other two princes didn't overhear? I smell trouble there. Oh crap, looking like his older brother is NOT a good thing for Legolas, is it? I hope no one is killed off in the next chapter... *hurrying to go read it now* | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/25/2004 |
| Okay, again I say tht Thranduil should be smacked. I hope his wife no longer shares his bed, because after this she really shouldn't! I'm glad legolas chose the nice boy and I'm sure he'll be a fine warrior with such a good friend and the nice teacher. :) | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/25/2004 |
| Now I know the other children's names, thanks. So Teril was a bad child, huh? Does that excuse him being killed? Was he killed in retaliation for something? I'm confused! One point I am NOT confused on is that if I'd found MY child being so cruel to an animal he'd have been beaten soundly, made to give the creature a proper burial and then I'd have beaten him again. You do NOT let kids ever think being cruel like that is acceptable! Both Nana and Ada are responsible for that Teril turning out wrong like he did. *shaking my head* Making Legolas go stand out there like that was kinda mean. I wouldn't have done that to him, but I don't know the traditions you have created for your elves here, there's no precedent for the reader to go by. I'm hooked into the story though, so on to the next part. :) | |
| Duchess | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2004 |
| How awful of Thranduil to not even acknowledge his son! If I were the Queen I'd take my children and leave, go to Rivendale or Lorien. You implied there are others, where are they and what are their names? How old are they? | |