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Shadows of a Nameless Fear  by Budgielover 18 Review(s)
CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/10/2006
Oh oh. But what I like most of this thrilling chapter - aside from Aragorn's royal rage - is the fact that you don't keep Frodo completely helpless, even in his anguish, pain, fear and weakness. There are too many stories out there where Frodo is nothing like a limp bundle, constantly unconscious, having been unconscious for days or faiting soon. Here we have a fighter. Thank you so much for this!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/22/2006
I read this one before but don't appear to have left a review. Excellently done. No, taking the Ringbearer shouldn't be an easy task, and am so glad Frodo's as good with thrown stones as only Hobbits can be.

Author Reply: Bless your heart, Larner dear - I just realized you have left a review on every single chapter. I am 'catching up' tonight on thanking people for their reviews (some people are so good at that ... I am not one of them, unfortunately) and wanted to tell you how much I appreciate that.

Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/14/2006
Oh, wow! YOur powress as an author amazes me! That was so wonderful! It's amazing how desperation can make us do things we never knew were possible. I can imagine those ruffians were in for more than they bargained for!
I'm sorry you only had one cousin. I myself have...uh, over eighteen. But six are the closest to us. Family reunions are so much fun. Anyway, hannon le for this story. It's been wonderful. Namarie!
GOd Bless,
Frodo Baggins

Author Reply: Frodo Baggins, I envy you. So many cousins! I envy you those family reunions, too - treasure them. They must give you wonderful ideas for plot bunnies for hobbit gatherings. You are most welcome for this story, and I am glad you are enjoying it so.

Sarah-lynnReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/13/2006
I love this story so effectively written so far...whens the next update? :)



Author Reply: Greetings, Sarah-lynn! I'm so pleased you like the story. Chapter Seven was delayed by the acquisition of an iPod, but having conquored that, I am back to writing. Chapter Seven, "In a Pit of Darkness," was posted on SOA Sunday night, July 2. Enjoy!

GreanReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/7/2006
I just found this and devoured all of the chapters at once,,,, oh my God.... Frodo.....
The action in the last chapter is fantastically written I felt as if I were seeing it all occur on screen. Bravo.
Love resourceful Frodo, brave and defiant.
I can only hope help arrives before these evil men retake their prize.
Thank you so much for this marvelous fic.

Going off to find more of your tales.

Author Reply: Hello, Grean! Thank you for your review - you made my day. Your comment of 'written as if you had seen it on screen' was just about the most encouraging thing you could have said. Action is difficult to plot and write, and to be told I did it right is very rewarding. Thank you!

(And I hope you enjoy the other stories!)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2006
Oh no, this is terrible! They've gotten Frodo lost now, and even if he should escape he'll have a time getting back. But go, Frodo! Good moves! I love it! Oh, Budgie, please hurry!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: It tickled me pink, Queen Galadriel, to read your 'oh no, this is terrible' followed by 'I love it!' Seriously, I am glad. This story is turning into a real actionfest, but it actually does have a plot. (We just haven't got to it, yet. *grins* )

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2006
Small - but dangerous.

And there's nothing like vomiting over your attacker to put him off. Less dingy men would have run at that point - but this lot's sense of smell is probably impaired.

I hope Pippin heard Frodo - clearly enough to judge direction. I don't think these captors will treat the Ringbearer too kindly if they capture him. Mid you - jumping through a doorway sight unseen ... still - considering the alternative.

Save that Frodo!

Author Reply: Hi, Bodkin. If 'this lot' had had any sense to start with, they would have known better than to tangle with the Saviour of Middle-earth! I think Frodo's physical size in no way reflects the size of his heart and courage. It would have been fun to have the Men begging for mercy, but well ... that wouldn't have made a good story, would it? *grins*

PeriantariReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/4/2006
Oh wow! how exciting! I love so many things in this chapter but especially brave, strong, determined Frodo! i loved how he fought back to those kidnappers! That's my Frodo! =)

If only he had his sling! And Sting. And his overzealous friends. And all of Aragorn’s army, while he was wishing.
And your bits of humor like this placed into the fic brings such a smile to my face. :)

I can hear Pippin now! i hope Frodo gets help soon!

Very exciting story, Budgie! i can't wait fro more! =)

Author Reply: Again, Periantari, I thank you for your review and for your encouraging words. And for your observant reading - it is so nice to hear that some people pick up on the little jokes hidden here and there. 100%-angst stories are so tiring - for the reader and the writer.

grumpyReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/3/2006
Good one Frodo, great chapter on what a hobbit can do to fight back. Also glad that Frodo was able to throw up on one of them. Poor guy that had to tell Aragorn the news.

Author Reply: Hi, Grumpy! Thank you for your review. Yes, Frodo throwing up on the leader of the bad men was a minor insult after the injury he heaped upon him, but I think it gave Frodo a small satisfaction. Those men won't think of hobbits as small, helpless creatures. And I felt sorry for the sedan chair bearer too ... telling a King bad news is never a good career choice.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/3/2006
Frodo could not believe his ears. Did they think him a child? The temptation to teach them otherwise was irresistible.

Yes! Go, Frodo!!!

Oh Budgielover, I love your Frodo! So cheeky, so brave and - well, so angry ;-)
I hope he'll make it to the door. He's really infuriated those men!

Perfect cliffhanger, as always :)


Author Reply: This is a different side of Frodo, isn't it, Andrea? VERY different from most of the fanfic out there. I'm glad it's not too different, so different he is unbelievable. I always try to keep my fics fresh, and when stretching a plot point, am a little apprehensive. Thank you for liking this stretch!

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