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| Fëanorians' Fates Drabble Series by Alassante | 8 Review(s) |
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| Starlight and Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/10/2018 |
| Ah this is so well-written! I love it! | |
| Alquawende | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 2/6/2008 |
| *cries* Maglor's stories are always sad to read. I like this, even if it is sad... | |
| Alquawende | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/6/2008 |
| >>Dior, son of the treacherous Beren, displays Nauglamir around his neck boldly and he will pay for his audacity. Could 'the Nauglimir' work instead of 'displays Nauglimir'? I really like the last part of the above quote with the word audacity. I personally think it's one of the best words to use with Celegorm who is one of the prouder sons of the Sons of Feanor. This was very good to read. | |
| couch broccloi | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/14/2006 |
| That was powerful. the anguish felt of a mother who not only has to endure the estrangement of her family due to her husband's selfish pursuits, but now the death of three of her children nearly simultaneously. Made even more painful by the fact that they should have endured forever, but are instead gone forever. | |
| Couch Broccoli | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/14/2006 |
| I really like the circular logic at play in this one. Celegorm seeks to redeem the attrocities committed by him and his brothers, by committing even worse attrocities. As I have stated before noone views themselves as evil, they always find some way to justify their actions no matter how hideous. The view inside Celegorms head shows this perfectly, as well as the fact that the closer they come to the prize the more it slips from their grasp. | |
| couch broccoli | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/10/2006 |
| I tend to be a bit obsessive myself and have felt the voice of compulsion calling me to some self destructive end. Despite my own personal views of Feanor I find this look into his motivations very insightful. His desire made him the pawn of his own creations and he was consumed in the fires his insatiable lust for them, even as all he held dear was also lead to ruin. | |
| Couch broccoli | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/10/2006 |
| I like that. The outrage and anguish is captured beautifully. Rhyming couplets also make it more difficult. Well done. | |
| Haleth | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/13/2006 |
| This is beautiful, Al. It conveys the sorrow, pain and anger of the creaator. It also shows compassion and the desire to rekindle hope in a damaged world. Haleth | |