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A Bride for a King  by Madeleine 28 Review(s)
SimplegirlfromLPReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/5/2020
I loved this interaction between Lothíriel and Amrothos and of course Lothiriel and her father. It was great that Imrahil had a very good "basic" knowledge of the interactions between Lothiriel and Eomer. It was great to see Imrahil oh so calmly ask if there had been pre-martial sex between her and Eomer and do it so eloquently. LOL. Loved this. Thank you for writing. I had read these stories before, many years ago and loved them then and my feelings have not changed.

SimplegirlfromLPReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/4/2020
What a great chapter. I love reading how Amrothos' deals with his sister with this sensitive and uncomfortable subject between a brother and sister. It was sweet and funny. Enjoyed their exchange very much.Thank you for writing.

TariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/9/2011
This is my favorite chapter of the series by far. Amrothos is a hoot. I'd love to know someone like him. You did an excellent job of descibing the choas of thoughts going thru Lotherial's mind. Excellent job!

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/29/2008
Loved the struggle of wills between Lothy and her father-she is really his daughter in terms of wits and unpredictability. I really appreciate how the pieces of the puzzle seemed to fall together in this chapter--how Imrahil was not so "unaware" as he seemed and how Lothy seemed to have unwittingly set herself up to meet Eomer. Was very entertained about the whole dowry thing.

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/29/2008
Appreciate the unexpected wisdom in Madam Ioreth's advice.

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/29/2008
I truly enjoyed the quality Amrothos moments in this chapter! Relished every innocent word that Lothy said to the discomfort of our intrepid Amrothos. Made me wonder how Elphir would have reacted in the same situation though if he was backed into a corner. :-) The dialogue was priceless, so well written. My favorite was: "If I see a cat watching a bird then I know what the cat wants to do with that bird,” the "carnal gratification" line, his comparison of Eomer to a meat eating plant, and the line: "You can meet on equal terms. You are confused; he is bewildered. Hence, you make the perfect couple.”

Almost fell off my chair about the name of the boa, how fitting! Would have loved to meet Aunt Ivriniel!

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/29/2008
I enjoy the seamless way you switch to Eomer's and Lothy's POV's and it was great to read about how she felt about the whole business. The itneraction between Lothy and her two brothers was most engaging, I am now an Erchirion and Amrothos fan girl as well: Amrothos' mini-speeches are very entertaining.
Loved the way they tortured Lothy and her reaction to the news.

I laughed out loud at the frogspawn line--so priceless.

nautikaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/9/2007
I read this story along with your others as quickly as possible. I've decided now that I'd like at least a one-shot on Elphir, please! *That* courtship and ceremony should have been good for at least that much story! Grin!

Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/19/2006
you have a gift.

future_oxfordlass93Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/27/2006
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........................its just sooo romantic and utterly cute in a serious way. I know that did'nt make sense but I'm touched here. That was awesome. Tears of joy. I'm go back to crying now ok? ok.................

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