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Don't Panic!  by Boz4PM 4 Review(s)
IvyReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/30/2006
"There was no way on earth she could hallucinate something like him. He was beyond imagination." Yes, you're right...I didn't really think of the LOTR movie elves as being *that* beautiful, though they certainly had rather otherworldly features...and I love Elladan's personality. Though the whole thing with the elves and combs seems a *tad* cliché...but hey, whatever. :)
I really loved this chapter. It had just the right amount of psychology and action in it, though I do admit I wish Penny would act a bit less hysterical and try to seem under know? I guess it's part of the character, though (and of course OCs are easy targets for self-projection. I'm one of those calm-in-a-crisis people...Penny seems to be...ish. haha), and the important part is that you've been consistent with it. Nice work.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/11/2005
It's a good thing for Penny that she is into the languages more than I am :) :) She managed a lot more than I would have.

KittyReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/8/2005
“Ah, but my friend she is a female,” Elladan grinned. “And, what is more, a mortal female. A deadly combination, frankly, and one I could never hope to understand. However if, as her fellow mortal, you consider her behaviour odd, then I suppose it must be.”
*ROOOFL!!* That was priceless! Even if I should be insulted - it is so hilarious! As was the question of the necessarity of a comb!

Well, Penny's first look at an elf was quite dramatic, wasn't it? And then she knew what happened at the ford - poor Halbarad, he *can't* understand this at all!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/8/2005
I loved, just loved, Elladan's possessiveness over his comb.

And How had she been able to tell that without looking at a single track! How indeed?

Poor Penny.

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