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When the Dwarf Came A-Visiting  by Miriel 40 Review(s)
whispererReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/8/2013
what I've found! this one is Epic! thanks for the story.

HobbitReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/3/2004
i love this story!

powerwriterReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 6/30/2004
What a sense of humor this story has :D It seems every character loses out and yet it's all right! They just get on with things. I think writing it through Pippin's perspective really made the story. Good job! It was quite a tale...

Hai TookReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 6/28/2004
Hehe, all the punishments that had to be completed, from Bilbo's or others! I guess they have all got what was due them! Thank you!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/31/2004
Ah...my little manipulative Pippin! Full of innocent--*somewhat* innocent, mischief. Warms the toes! :-)

Pippinfan

Author Reply: Manipulation...the device used by everyone. :)

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/31/2004
Merry forgotten for the moment, Frodo reached over and tousled my curls. My scheme had worked; Frodo was now completely under my control. - Miriel

Love it! That's my Pip! lol.... I like how you have the three young hobbits relating to one another--well done!

Pippinfan

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/31/2004
This is too funny! You had me rotfl with tears in my eyes! Not many folks can carry off humor like this, and it appears you're one of those who can. I'll be reading more. :-)

Pippinfan


Author Reply: Thanks for your review! I just noticed that I had a bunch of reviews that I hadn't replied to and I thought...Pippinfan...she wrote the roses story!
I'm glad you liked the story. :)

Reasonably CrazyReviewed Chapter: 17 on 3/9/2004
Wow, that was so great! *stands, applauds, and whistles* You need to put the ending up at FF.net! I LOVE this fic!!!! Probably in my top three, if not in first place. LOL this was funny!!!!!! Is the Return from the void one here too? I'll have to look later- mom wants me to go work.

Long story short, this was STUPENDOUS!!!

EEEEEE!

:)

~Reasonably Crazy- or Jackie if you're boring, or Nienna if you're Elvish (according the the name generator by Chris.... Chris somebody...)

YAY!

Happy story!

Okay, I'm done. :D

Author Reply: I'm glad that you found your way over here to finish the fic. I got really lazy and annoyed with ff.n, so I just finished the story over here. However, the whole story is up at both places now.

Thanks for your reviews!

Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/1/2004
I took a reading break to say how much I love this story. It was a crack up for me when Bilbo stepped in the, ahem, 'pony gift', and I didn't remember until after a few paragraphs later that hobbits don't wear shoes. It is odd to think that while the hobbits are having these odd, blissful misadventures, that the other folk in Middle-earth are forced into more serious lives of battling evil...
It is only fair to tell you that you are one of my favorite authors and I eagerly await more work from you.

Author Reply: Aw...thank you so much. Sorry it took so long to reply to your review. That is an odd thought isn't it...hm...

Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/1/2004
*laughs* This is a very good story and written with a very 'hobbitish' style. Bombur has always been one of my favorite Dwarves, so I'm glad to see you kept him very well in character.

Author Reply: Well, thank you! It's always hard to keep characters in character...I'm glad that you think I did.

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