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Burden of Guilt  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 35 on 11/16/2005
That was a very pleasant interlude! I love the father/son bonding - and Arwen admiring the pair of them.

But Faramir! He's about to implode - if he doesn't release some of this pressure soon. (Great image - Eowyn waddling at full gallop to get help from A&A.)

Author Reply: I enjoyed writing the scene with Arwen,Aragorn and Eldarion very much.I think Faramir has just snapped hence Eowyn's rush to get help.Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

French PonyReviewed Chapter: 35 on 11/15/2005
Oh dear, Faramir's gone off to do something stupid, hasn't he? They shoulda got Arwen in to talk to him. She seems to be real good at the diplomacy thing, and I bet she could have soothed him despite himself.

At least Arwen got Aragorn to spend some time with the baby. I think Aragorn needed that.

Author Reply: I think Aragorn sometimes tries to protect Arwen instead of letting her help,though it would be much better to trust her wisdom.Faramir is at least forcing events to a climax !Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

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