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Paradox of the Fourth Age  by Alassante 3 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/16/2008
Very nice... Finally we see Elrohir and Laureanna bond in both times, nice work there. You can see how much they love each other.
But both of them being seperated is hard, and now she sees that one of them is hurt and believes one to be dying or already dead.

Very good...

Update soon...

Author Reply: I'm so behind on comments! Thanks so much for your comments. I really enjoyed this chapter - bringing them full circle to being married again.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/7/2008
Ah, so in this alternate universe one of the twins is injured at the very least? At least she has know the joy of her marriage! This is a very complicated situation in which she wasn't yet born when she went back in time....

But at least in this one Sauron has fallen. That is always good.

Author Reply: I'm trying to get caught up on comments! Thanks so much for your review. Yes, it is always good when Sauron loses - otherwise he just causes havoc in the world. =)

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/7/2008
I'm glad Laureanna and Elrohir are finally together again! Their first night (or should that be second?) was wonderful :)

I still think the Valar are very cruel to Laureanna - telling her the ring has been destroyed, but not what she really needs to know. Like everyone else, I'm desperate to know too - what's happened to Elladan and Elrohir???


Author Reply: I'm late on comments. *hangs head* Thanks for your review. The Valar aren't always known for being fair. And what fun would it be if they told her everything!?

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