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The Scruff Factor  by JastaElf 28 Review(s)
GalathilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/2/2011
Dear JastaElf I love this story and can't stop chuckling.Maybe Estel my stay tidy.What do you think? As for our three elven princes,a I'm glad that I'm not in their firing line.LOL Galathil.

MdhaerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/7/2009
Look, I'm know I'm being picky here, but your Elvish grammar is all wrong. It's mellon nn not nn mellon. etc... Also tithen pen not vice versa. 'Kay?
Please fix these grammatical errors.

Thanks,
Mdhaer

rickReviewed Chapter: 7 on 12/28/2008
Please please please do the sequel real soon now - this was such a hoot, I almost bust something from laughing too hard!

nediethReviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/6/2005
You did not fail to make me laugh in this one Jasta! In this one you made legolas so cute and innocent (looking), a side rarely explored in fanfiction except in young legolas fics. the descriptions were WONDERFUL, especially the clothing ones. I love clothes, not normal everyday casual clothes, but FANCY clothes. I don't get what most young woman today have with dresses and skirts, they actually give you more freedom than the "fashionable" jeans that are so tight you feel like your going to pass out. But that is extremely off topic. I also liked how you gave the various "side" characters, well, character! especially Erestor's, I don't think I've read anything where he has a good part ( I know there are several erestor/glorfindel fics, but I do not read slash). The humor was original, and a "return of the Scruff" would be most appreciated!

Nedieth, who finally got out the promised review.

RangerofthenorthReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/5/2005
umm, this is mostly based on the movie. I am more of a book fan fic person. For all we know, when it was safe, he may have bathed in a stream, and another thing, it is my belief that those of high numenorean blood did not have to shave because of the elvish blood mixed in. Making them unable to grow beards. Besides Tolkien never mentioned Estel having a beard, stubble, whatever you wanna call it. That is all. I guess the story is kinda funny for a movie based fan fic. (no disrespect or meanfullness meant)

phoenix23531Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/4/2005
By the Valar, you are likely to get me fired! I was reading this latest chapter while taking a quick break at work, and am going to have nasty bite marks on my tongue from trying so hard not to laugh! This was indeed a most wonderful, cheeky, devious ending to a fantastic tale. I simply cannot wait for the sequel! Please don't delay it's posting too long, I beg you.
heheheheheeee, the rest of my day is looking decidedly more cheerful.

All the best,
Emma

CelebrianReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/3/2005
Good story, only your phrase "Mae govannen, nn mellon" means nothing in the elven language. And your when Aragorn said "...I could eat a orc" thats a bad use of words. Elves sadly *sigh* are related to orcs, but NOT uriks. They don't want to be. Other than that, Great Story!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Oh excellent! I've been out of town and returned to find this. I love the way you mix contemporary snippy language with the most regal of elven portrayals. And I want to hear the story of Elrond telling Thranduil to "stop that right now."

I like the way you've set up the Gimli & Legolas interaction too.

This was well worth waiting for, Jasta.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Jasta, it was great to read this at long last! The poor twins - Legolas has run rings around them both, yet they keep coming back for more. I rather like the thought of a Sindar filling in a Noldor sandwich - I've read some interesting slash fics on that theme!;)


Jay

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
That was a fantastic story. Really made me laugh and I enjoyed it alot. Legolas is one clever elf. I didn't see that one coming. I'll be looking out for the sequel.
-sofia

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