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The Scruff Factor  by JastaElf 28 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Poor twins - they don't stand a chance against the doe-eyed Moriquendi. A brilliant finale to a hilarious story. I'm not sure who it is that I sympathise with most - (twins, I think. They keep coming back for more without any realisation that they are outclassed.)

The idea of having them all gang up on Aragorn to see that he is in a fit state for the coronation and the wedding of the age is extremely appealing - and judging from the impression that movie Aragorn had actually managed to brush his hair for the first time before meeting his bride, they might actually have succeeded.

I look forward to seeing how they manage it!

French PonyReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/2/2005
I love it! Lord of the Rings as a screwball comedy! The tricks, the turns of phrase, the timing. . . brilliant!

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/2/2005
Hhahahahhahahhahahhaha!!!!! I''ve been laughing for most of this chapter and the people in the library are giving me funny looks. Oh well. Great piece I'm gonna read it again, because I could really go for a nolder sandwich with some extra silvan filling! I can't wait for return of the scruff, and I am just bouncing off the walls until it comes out! Your faithful reader that is shamelessly in love with this story, Galimeril ;D

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/2/2005
Well, I must say that for as much as liked the fine form our princely princeling was in, I am dismayed by how long it is taking a certain elder twin to calm himself. I supposed we really must work on that temper- his human heritage (for that must be it) comes out at the strangest times. I laughed at so many lines that I'd just recopy the story to quote them here.

A very fine end to a wonderful story, and we can hope that they did indeed have a little fun desite the heaviness of the time. I do look forward to seeing part II at the Coronation!

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/2/2005
Oh my god this is sick and twisted! I haven't laughed this hard in a very long time. I can't believe that I have never seen this fic before. There is too much to comment on so I will only say that, though I think there is more to this than I likely completely got (some of this has to be inside jokes too), it was brilliantly witty. Every line had me laughing. Great work!

TiggerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/31/2004
Oh *my*!! That was brillant!! I've got tears in my eyes thanks to poor Elladan's rant and I could see the entire thing so clearly. Too bad he didn't have the wisdome Elrohir had. To beat a retreat from their Adar when he had that chance...LOL!!

Thank you so much for the wonderful laugh. Oh and giggling in bathing chambers is a normal thing. Need to remember that one...*snicker* ;o)

Thanks again!!

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/9/2004
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! HE HE HE HE! Cant't... breathe! HA HA HEHEHEH!

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/8/2004
HAHAHAHA! I love it! HEHEHEHE! As soon as I get someone to stich my sides back together I'll finish this tale. I can't believe it took me this long to find such a jewel! I'm reading just as fast as I can, becausre this story just tickles me pink!

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/27/2004
wow! I love this story. its so funny. I laughed out loud alot. Ill be sure to check out your other work.
-sofia

mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/21/2004
Shan't give you a review until the epilogue is posted .
Enjoyed the nods to both book-and-movie-verse, fun for everyone!
H

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